provide -> providing
fail over -> failover
deactivates encrypted volume -> deactivates the encrypted volume

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@@ -615,8 +615,8 @@ This virtual disk is treated as any othe
     Many applications need more redundancy than just the disks, and for some
     applications, RAID can be just added complication, rather than a real
     benefit.
-    An example of this is a CARP'd set of firewalls provide complete
-    fail over redundancy.
+    An example of this is a CARP'd set of firewalls providing complete
+    failover redundancy.
     In this case, adding RAID (either via hardware or softraid) is just
     added complication.
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@@ -934,8 +934,8 @@ and then repeat the last four commands a
 <p>
 The man page for this looks a little scary, as the <tt>-d</tt> command is
 described as "deleting" the volume.
-In the case of crypto, however, it just deactivates encrypted volume so it
-can't be accessed until it is activated again with the passphrase.
+In the case of crypto, however, it just deactivates the encrypted volume so
+it can't be accessed until it is activated again with the passphrase.
 
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