This way it's feels much more natural to say.

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@@ -795,8 +795,8 @@ in two variants:
 <tt>COMMENT-s2</tt> for the second package,
 <tt>PLIST-s1</tt>, <tt>PLIST-s2</tt>, <tt>DESCR-s1</tt>, <tt>DESCR-s2</tt>.
 You need to write those <tt>COMMENT-s1</tt> and <tt>COMMENT-s2</tt> in the
-<tt>Makefile</tt>, and to split your <tt>PLIST</tt> into two parts, and to
-create <tt>DESCR-s1/DESCR-s2</tt>.
+<tt>Makefile</tt>, split your <tt>PLIST</tt> into two parts, and create
+<tt>DESCR-s1/DESCR-s2</tt>.
 You will also need to specify separate <tt>PKGNAME</tt>s for all subpackages.
 
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