Status of draft: Ready for publication, a few editorial nits
Concerns: None
WG Request/Reminder: We'll need to make sure these parameters update the
TRILL Yang data model.
Editorial NITs:
1. Section 2 Page 5, before first paragraph
The text would be clear if prior to the first paragraph beginning "lz
is reported", you add a section header with: "operations" as title.
2. Section 3 page 6
Step 0, #2, b
Old:/Repeat step 1/ to
New: /Repeat/Do step 1/
I think the first time through, you have not gotten to Step 1:.
If this is not true, then this becomes a concern rather than a nit.
3. Section 4, page 8, paragraph 0, sub-paragraph 2). Paragraph begins
/2) when an Rbridge/
It may be nice to explain why only equal is treated.
- Less than Sz, it is not in campus
- Greater than Sz, some other trill Rbridge has limiting size
- Only if equal to Sz, it is possible that it changes Sz.
Sue Hares
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