Re: Comment on SDO overview from Tuscany site

2006-10-12 Thread Yang ZHONG
No comment in the past 10 days; can I assume the update looks fine and I can sumbit a patch please? The timing seems nice since we're releasing M2. -- Yang ZHONG

Re: Comment on SDO overview from Tuscany site

2006-09-29 Thread Yang ZHONG
I've just updated the demo into http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/TUSCANY-751 Please review by unzip http://issues.apache.org/jira/secure/attachment/12341982/NewSdoOverview2.zip and use a browser to open sdo_index.html; the introduction page (thank Kelvin) is 1 click (bottom) from the

Re: Comment on SDO overview from Tuscany site

2006-09-27 Thread kelvin goodson
Hi Yang, thanks for that. A few comments ... - i agree with Luciano that we are trying to get too much on the overview page - it would be nice to take more control of the layout, particularly so that the single lines of text associated with images are clearly associated with those images and

Re: Comment on SDO overview from Tuscany site

2006-09-27 Thread kelvin goodson
Sorry Yang, one further thought on the UML diagram is that you have labelled the link between DataObject and ChangeSummary as changeSummary, which might lead the user to think that changeSummary is an instance member of DataObject and that they could somehow simply trigger a non-null

Re: Comment on SDO overview from Tuscany site

2006-09-27 Thread Luciano Resende
I'm not saying this is/was Java only, just suggesting it could be somewhere else other then on the first page. The java overview was just an example, but maybe java and c++ overview could link to a page describing the sdo object model and then it would bring up your class diagram page... and then

Re: Comment on SDO overview from Tuscany site

2006-09-26 Thread Yang ZHONG
I've just attached a demo into http://issues.apache.org/jira/browse/TUSCANY-751 Please review by unzip http://issues.apache.org/jira/secure/attachment/12341763/NewSdoOverview.zip and use a browser to open sdo_index.html; the overview diagram can be clicked into respective introduction.

Re: Comment on SDO overview from Tuscany site

2006-09-26 Thread Luciano Resende
I'm going to give you the same feedback I got for the DAS pages. The overview page should not be very overloaded, in your case, I'd recommend moving the class/object diagram for a secundary page, probably linked from the SDO Java page. - Luciano On 9/26/06, Yang ZHONG [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

Re: Comment on SDO overview from Tuscany site

2006-09-22 Thread Yang ZHONG
Thank Andrew for the support and thank Kelvin and Geoff for the text contribution. I propose this brief description right after SDO is a natural format ...: SDO provides flexible data structures that allow data to be organized as graphs of objects (called data objects) that are composed of