Public bug reported:

ORIGINAL: *A bunch of different blocks of text.

Deciding which files to back up, and locating them, is the most
difficult step when attempting to perform a backup. Listed below are the
most common locations of important files and settings that you may want
to back up.

Personal files (documents, music, photos and videos)
These are usually stored in your home folder (/home/your_name). They could be 
in subfolders such as Desktop, Documents, Pictures, Music and Videos.
If your backup medium has sufficient space (if it's an external hard disk, for 
example), consider backing up the entire Home folder. You can find out how much 
disk space your Home folder takes up by using the Disk Usage Analyzer.

...

System-wide settings
Settings for important parts of the system aren't stored in your Home folder. 
There are a number of locations that they could be stored, but most are stored 
in the /etc folder. In general, you won't need to back up these files on a home 
computer. If you are running a server, however, you should back up the files 
for the services that it is running.

SUGGESTED:

Deciding which files to locate and back up can be very difficult. Listed below 
are the most common locations of important files and settings that you may want 
to back up.
WHY? *Inverted order between "locate" and "back up."

Personal files (documents, music, photos and videos)
These are usually stored in your home folder (/home/your_name). They could be 
in subfolders such as Desktop, Documents, Pictures, Music, and Videos.
If your backup medium has sufficient space (e.g. external hard disk), consider 
backing up the entire Home folder. You can find out how much disk space your 
Home folder takes up by using the Disk Usage Analyzer.
WHY? *"Music and Videos" and "Music, and Videos" have subtle differences.

...

System-wide settings
Settings for important parts of the system are not stored in your Home folder. 
However, they are most commonly found in the /etc folder. On a home computer, 
you generally won't need to back up these files. On a server, however, you 
should back up the files for the major services that run in the system.
*WHY? The paragraph needed major improvement.  This paragraph is the most 
bothersome. Feedback would be appreciated.

** Affects: ubuntu-docs (Ubuntu)
     Importance: Undecided
         Status: New


** Tags: bitesize saucy

** Description changed:

  ORIGINAL: *A bunch of different blocks of text.
  
  Deciding which files to back up, and locating them, is the most
  difficult step when attempting to perform a backup. Listed below are the
  most common locations of important files and settings that you may want
  to back up.
  
  Personal files (documents, music, photos and videos)
  These are usually stored in your home folder (/home/your_name). They could be 
in subfolders such as Desktop, Documents, Pictures, Music and Videos.
  If your backup medium has sufficient space (if it's an external hard disk, 
for example), consider backing up the entire Home folder. You can find out how 
much disk space your Home folder takes up by using the Disk Usage Analyzer.
  
  ...
  
  System-wide settings
  Settings for important parts of the system aren't stored in your Home folder. 
There are a number of locations that they could be stored, but most are stored 
in the /etc folder. In general, you won't need to back up these files on a home 
computer. If you are running a server, however, you should back up the files 
for the services that it is running.
  
  SUGGESTED:
  
  Deciding which files to locate and back up can be very difficult. Listed 
below are the most common locations of important files and settings that you 
may want to back up.
- WHY? *Inverted order between "locate" and "back up." 
+ WHY? *Inverted order between "locate" and "back up."
  
  Personal files (documents, music, photos and videos)
  These are usually stored in your home folder (/home/your_name). They could be 
in subfolders such as Desktop, Documents, Pictures, Music, and Videos.
  If your backup medium has sufficient space (e.g. external hard disk), 
consider backing up the entire Home folder. You can find out how much disk 
space your Home folder takes up by using the Disk Usage Analyzer.
- WHY? *"Music and Videos" and "Music, and Videos" have subtle differences. 
+ WHY? *"Music and Videos" and "Music, and Videos" have subtle differences.
  
  ...
  
  System-wide settings
- Settings for important parts of the system are not stored in your Home 
folder. However, they are most commonly found in the /etc folder. On a home 
computer, you generally won't need to back up these files. On a server, 
however, you should back up the files for the services that run in the system.
+ Settings for important parts of the system are not stored in your Home 
folder. However, they are most commonly found in the /etc folder. On a home 
computer, you generally won't need to back up these files. On a server, 
however, you should back up the files for the major services that run in the 
system.
  *WHY? The paragraph needed major improvement.  This paragraph is the most 
bothersome. Feedback would be appreciated.

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