There are two instances where plural needs to be used instead of
singular:
1. "descriptor(s)" is used later in the text, so use it consistently
instead of starting with "descriptor" and switching later.
2. "What follows is the requirements" ->
"What follows are the requirements"
Signed-off-by: Stefan Hajnoczi <stefa...@redhat.com>
---
packed-ring.tex | 4 ++--
1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
diff --git a/packed-ring.tex b/packed-ring.tex
index 4e5c9b2..00befae 100644
--- a/packed-ring.tex
+++ b/packed-ring.tex
@@ -525,7 +525,7 @@ when using the packed virtqueue format in more detail.
The driver offers buffers to one of the device's virtqueues as follows:
\begin{enumerate}
-\item The driver places the buffer into free descriptor in the Descriptor Ring.
+\item The driver places the buffer into free descriptor(s) in the Descriptor
Ring.
\item The driver performs a suitable memory barrier to ensure that it updates
the descriptor(s) before checking for notification suppression.
@@ -534,7 +534,7 @@ The driver offers buffers to one of the device's virtqueues
as follows:
of the new available buffers.
\end{enumerate}
-What follows is the requirements of each stage in more detail.
+What follows are the requirements of each stage in more detail.
\subsubsection{Placing Available Buffers Into The Descriptor
Ring}\label{sec:Basic Facilities of a Virtio Device / Virtqueues / Supplying
Buffers to The Device / Placing Available Buffers Into The Descriptor Ring}
--
2.14.3
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