[virtio-dev] Re: [virtio] [PATCH v7 07/11] split-ring: generalize text

2018-01-30 Thread Michael S. Tsirkin
On Tue, Jan 30, 2018 at 11:45:35AM +0100, Cornelia Huck wrote:
> On Tue, 23 Jan 2018 02:01:06 +0200
> "Michael S. Tsirkin"  wrote:
> 
> > Update generic text to talk about available/used buffers, not rings.
> > Move some split-ring specific text to the correct section.
> > 
> > Signed-off-by: Michael S. Tsirkin 
> > ---
> >  content.tex| 12 +---
> >  split-ring.tex |  4 
> >  2 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
> > 
> > diff --git a/content.tex b/content.tex
> > index 5634c7d..0f7c2b9 100644
> > --- a/content.tex
> > +++ b/content.tex
> 
> > @@ -4652,7 +4650,7 @@ Interface: Device Operation}
> >  When using the legacy interface, the driver SHOULD ignore the
> >  used length values.
> >  \begin{note}
> > -Historically, devices put the total descriptor length,
> > +Historically, devices put the total length,
> >  or the total length of device-writable buffers there,
> >  even when only part of the buffers were actually written.
> 
> This sentence reads a bit weirdly now. Total length of what?

Of readable and writeable buffers.

> >  \end{note}
> > diff --git a/split-ring.tex b/split-ring.tex
> > index acdee7d..f976e45 100644
> > --- a/split-ring.tex
> > +++ b/split-ring.tex
> > @@ -296,6 +296,10 @@ referred to this structure as vring_avail, and the 
> > constant as
> >  VRING_AVAIL_F_NO_INTERRUPT, but the layout and value were identical.
> >  \end{note}
> >  
> > +\drivernormative{\subsubsection}{The Virtqueue Available Ring}{Basic 
> > Facilities of a Virtio Device / Virtqueues / The Virtqueue Available Ring}
> > +A driver MUST NOT decrement the available \field{idx} on a virtqueue (ie.
> > +there is no way to ``unexpose'' buffers).
> 
> Don't you need to reference that drivernormative section?

Right, I forgot that part. Will do.

> 
> (It is a bit confusing with all those interim changes; maybe I should
> only review the end result...)


> > +
> >  \subsection{Virtqueue Interrupt Suppression}\label{sec:Basic Facilities of 
> > a Virtio Device / Virtqueues / Virtqueue Interrupt Suppression}
> >  
> >  If the VIRTIO_F_EVENT_IDX feature bit is not negotiated,

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[virtio-dev] Re: [virtio] [PATCH v7 07/11] split-ring: generalize text

2018-01-30 Thread Cornelia Huck
On Tue, 23 Jan 2018 02:01:06 +0200
"Michael S. Tsirkin"  wrote:

> Update generic text to talk about available/used buffers, not rings.
> Move some split-ring specific text to the correct section.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Michael S. Tsirkin 
> ---
>  content.tex| 12 +---
>  split-ring.tex |  4 
>  2 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/content.tex b/content.tex
> index 5634c7d..0f7c2b9 100644
> --- a/content.tex
> +++ b/content.tex

> @@ -4652,7 +4650,7 @@ Interface: Device Operation}
>  When using the legacy interface, the driver SHOULD ignore the
>  used length values.
>  \begin{note}
> -Historically, devices put the total descriptor length,
> +Historically, devices put the total length,
>  or the total length of device-writable buffers there,
>  even when only part of the buffers were actually written.

This sentence reads a bit weirdly now. Total length of what?

>  \end{note}
> diff --git a/split-ring.tex b/split-ring.tex
> index acdee7d..f976e45 100644
> --- a/split-ring.tex
> +++ b/split-ring.tex
> @@ -296,6 +296,10 @@ referred to this structure as vring_avail, and the 
> constant as
>  VRING_AVAIL_F_NO_INTERRUPT, but the layout and value were identical.
>  \end{note}
>  
> +\drivernormative{\subsubsection}{The Virtqueue Available Ring}{Basic 
> Facilities of a Virtio Device / Virtqueues / The Virtqueue Available Ring}
> +A driver MUST NOT decrement the available \field{idx} on a virtqueue (ie.
> +there is no way to ``unexpose'' buffers).

Don't you need to reference that drivernormative section?

(It is a bit confusing with all those interim changes; maybe I should
only review the end result...)

> +
>  \subsection{Virtqueue Interrupt Suppression}\label{sec:Basic Facilities of a 
> Virtio Device / Virtqueues / Virtqueue Interrupt Suppression}
>  
>  If the VIRTIO_F_EVENT_IDX feature bit is not negotiated,


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