Dear Sirs,
I am grateful for your valuable feedback and suggestions.
I have updated my proposal based on the inputs given by you. The split-up
of the deliverables on the ideas page indeed helped me understand the
requirements more clearly.
The link to my updated proposal is
This looks much more in-depth and helpful. I think your best next step is to,
if you haven't already, connect with potential mentors and indicate who those
folks are within your proposal.
-Greg
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