I find this pretty amazing - when you broke near the end a few times with
the 'mandy' beginning, it lost me slightly, but then seemed right. the
intensity carries through in this all the way; it seems incredibly real in
spite of, or because of, the structure. I hope you continue with it - Alan
On 4/6/06, Alan Sondheim [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
I find this pretty amazing - when you broke near the end a few times withthe 'mandy' beginning, it lost me slightly, but then seemed right. theintensity carries through in this all the way; it seems incredibly real in
spite of, or because of, the
a word on a screen. mandy is viewed through a glass tank and suspended
in animation all the stories but what the point?
mandy has rings under her eyes, hair down to her shoulders, lips that
are nice. she is not vulnerable but she puts herself in places that
are.
suspended in all the stories but
