[WSG] site check please - an illustrated novel

2004-12-08 Thread designer
Hi All, I would be grateful for any and all feedback on a redesign I've done for a site which presents an illustrated novel. Some of it is a weeny bit hybrid, but (a small amount of flash aside) it all validates as xhtml and presentational matter is down to an absolute minimum. I have not done

Re: [WSG] site check please - an illustrated novel

2004-12-08 Thread Tom Livingston
Hello, My only beef with this site is you seem to have *two* splash pages. One is bad enough... Tom Livingston Senior Multimedia Artist mlinc.com designer wrote: Hi All, I would be grateful for any and all feedback on a redesign I've done for a site which presents an illustrated novel. Some

Re: [WSG] site check please - an illustrated novel

2004-12-08 Thread Will Jensen
Bob, Purely from the aesthetics level. Drop the entire first page - or two - The very first one blinked on my screen for perhaps 3 seconds and was gone. The second was the spinning record. The main window - number three, is where I should land right off - no other pages between me and your main