CipherSuite.java
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74:  There is a mix of ciphersuite initialization styles, which I find confusing.
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These two suites may not be the best comparison, since you have a non-AEAD stream cipher up against AES-GCM.  For the latter, I think M_MULL in the MacAlg field is the right thing because GCM doesn't have a separate HMAC.  The authentication is performed through GHASH.  The only place for SHA-256 in this suite is for the PRF, IIUC.  As a second data point ChaCha20-Poly1305 suites (when we eventually do them) would also use M_NULL for the MacAlg since Poly1305 takes care of the authentication internally and SHA-256 is just used with PRF and/or HKDF in the TLS 1.3 case.
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I agreed with Jamil.

Makes perfect sense now, thanks.

262:  What is the point of the aliases argument in the constructor? Was the idea to provide a mapping between suites we originally created with the SSL_ prefix vs the more current TLS_ prefix we used in the later TLS protocols?  There is only an empty string in every constructor, so this code doesn't do anything.

Added the aliases.

Great, thanks. Once minor formatting comment which would help comparability/readability. Take or leave it.

    SSL_DHE_RSA_WITH_3DES_EDE_CBC_SHA(
            0x0016, true, "SSL_DHE_RSA_WITH_3DES_EDE_CBC_SHA",
            "TLS_DHE_RSA_WITH_3DES_EDE_CBC_SHA",
            ProtocolVersion.PROTOCOLS_TO_12,
            K_DHE_RSA, B_3DES, M_SHA, H_SHA256),
->
    SSL_DHE_RSA_WITH_3DES_EDE_CBC_SHA(
            0x0016, true, "SSL_DHE_RSA_WITH_3DES_EDE_CBC_SHA",
                          "TLS_DHE_RSA_WITH_3DES_EDE_CBC_SHA",
            ProtocolVersion.PROTOCOLS_TO_12,
            K_DHE_RSA, B_3DES, M_SHA, H_SHA256),

803/814/824/867:  I'm concerned of the performance impact of repeatedly iterating over 300+ ciphersuite ids/names using values(). You should benchmark and see if it makes sense to switch to using a HashMap (or even TreeMap) here.  For the limited number of Protocols (< 10 for TLSv1.x), this approach is fine, but this has quite a bit larger search space.

Good point!  This enhancement now is tracked with
     https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8204636

Good, thanks.

840:  Is this else/break needed?

Yes.  It is mostly for performance by ignoring unsupported cipher suites look up.

Ah, because they are coming out of .values() ordered, and the unsupported are at the end. Can you change the comment:

the following cipher suites are not supported.
->
values() is ordered, remaining cipher suites are not supported.


SSLServerSocketImpl.java
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160:  You should allow multiple changes between server to client, and switch enabled protocols/ciphersuites accordingly.

Yes, multiple changes are allowed.

I didn't see a change here. If you go from server (default) to client, and then back again, shouldn't you reset to the original server values? And set sslConfig.useClientMode()

e.g.
    sslServerSocket.setUseClientMode(true);
    sslServerSocket.setUseClientMode(false);

The current code won't change back to server.


SSLConfiguration.java
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40:  There is a new unused import here.

SSLSocketImpl.java
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28:  I'm not a fan of unnecessarily expanding the imports. Netbeans has/had a default of 5, but apparently turned it off by default in favor of single class imports.

I'm a fan of expanding the imports now.  It is more clear about the imported classes and the packet of a particular class.

For example, we can use:
import java.net.*;
import java.io.*;

Or
import java.net.Socket;
import java.io.StringReader;

If using the "*" option, we don't actually know if Socket is in packet java.net or java.io.  So if IDE has made the update, I'm not included to update them back any more.

Just seems like a lot of extra necessary cruft when you have lots of specifics (e.g. >5 like in SSLEngineImpl.java), but that's just my personal preference. And IDEs can be set to do all kinds of formatting. :)

76:  Are you set on the name conContext?  I'm still not 100% sure what it stands for.  Alternate transportContext or connectionContext?

The name is implying connection context, but it is an instance of TransportContext.  Do you like, traContext, for transport context?  I'd like to use a short name as it is used a lot that it is easy to exceed the 80 character per line limit.

Nothing really jump at me.

Brad


92:  trustNameService could be private and all in caps.

Updated.

102-269:  Any chance of combining the commonalities of these different constructors into 1, and then do the constructor-specific things at the end?  It will help with future maintenance to not have to make the same changes in multiple places.

It is not clear to me now.  The issue is tracked with:
     https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8204636

484:  A couple comments here would be appreciated about what these App* classes do.  The old comments in App[InputStream would be sufficient, plus some of the other comments stripped out inside the class:

     Read data if needed ... notice that the connection guarantees
     that handshake, alert, and change cipher spec data streams are
     handled as they arrive, so we never see them here.

Updated.

Nice job on this refactoring in this class, there was a heck of a lot of cruft in this file after 20+ years.  I am anxious to see how the rest of the code is laid out.


TransportContext.java
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90:  Any chance of combining these 3 constructors into 1?  Almost identical duplicate code here.

This issue had been addressed in one of Tony's changesets:
    http://hg.openjdk.java.net/jdk/sandbox/rev/b152d06ed6a9

682-683:  These can be final.

Updated.

Thanks,
Xuelei


Thanks,

Brad



On 6/8/2018 10:21 AM, Xuelei Fan wrote:
Here is the 3rd full webrev:
    http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~xuelei/8196584/webrev-full.02

and the delta update to the 1st webrev:
    http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~xuelei/8196584/webrev-delta.01

Xuelei

On 6/3/2018 9:43 PM, Xuelei Fan wrote:
Hi,

Here it the 2nd full webrev:
   http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~xuelei/8196584/webrev-full.01

and the delta update to the 1st webrev:
   http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~xuelei/8196584/webrev-delta.00/

Xuelei

On 5/25/2018 4:45 PM, Xuelei Fan wrote:
Hi,

I'd like to invite you to review the TLS 1.3 implementation.  I appreciate it if I could have compatibility and specification feedback before May 31, 2018, and implementation feedback before June 7, 2018.

Here is the webrev:
http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~xuelei/8196584/webrev-full.00

The formal TLS 1.3 specification is not finalized yet, although it had been approved to be a standard.  The implementation is based on the draft version 28:
     https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tls-tls13-28

For the overall description of this enhancement, please refer to JEP 332:
     http://openjdk.java.net/jeps/332

For the compatibility and specification update, please refer to CSR 8202625:
     https://bugs.openjdk.java.net/browse/JDK-8202625

Note that we are using the sandbox for the development right now. For more information, please refer to Bradford's previous email:

http://mail.openjdk.java.net/pipermail/security-dev/2018-May/017139.html

Thanks & Regards,
Xuelei

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