On Thu, 1 May 2025 15:02:11 GMT, Sean Mullan <mul...@openjdk.org> wrote:

>> Weijun Wang has updated the pull request incrementally with one additional 
>> commit since the last revision:
>> 
>>   engineGetBlockSize and engineGetOutputSize returns 0 when not initialized
>
> src/java.base/share/classes/javax/crypto/spec/snippet-files/PackageSnippets.java
>  line 46:
> 
>> 44:         senderCipher.init(Cipher.ENCRYPT_MODE, kp.getPublic(), ps);
>> 45: 
>> 46:         // Retrieve the actual parameters used from the sender.
> 
> "from the sender" sound like it is being retrieved from the sender side over 
> the network. Suggest replacing this with "from the senderCipher".

How about "Extracts the actual parameters from `senderCipher`"?

> src/java.base/share/classes/javax/crypto/spec/snippet-files/PackageSnippets.java
>  line 50:
> 
>> 48:                 .getParameterSpec(HPKEParameterSpec.class);
>> 49: 
>> 50:         // Retrieve the key encapsulation message (the KEM output) from 
>> the sender.
> 
> Same comment as above about "from the sender".

How about "Extracts the key encapsulation message (the KEM output) from 
`senderCipher`"?

> src/java.base/share/classes/javax/crypto/spec/snippet-files/PackageSnippets.java
>  line 51:
> 
>> 49: 
>> 50:         // Retrieve the key encapsulation message (the KEM output) from 
>> the sender.
>> 51:         // It can also be retrieved using sender.getIV().
> 
> s/sender/senderCipher/

Correct.

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PR Review Comment: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/18411#discussion_r2070417472
PR Review Comment: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/18411#discussion_r2070418278
PR Review Comment: https://git.openjdk.org/jdk/pull/18411#discussion_r2070419002

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