> On Oct 14, 2016, at 1:54 AM, Alan Bateman <alan.bate...@oracle.com> wrote: > > On 14/10/2016 09:08, Amit Sapre wrote: >> Alan, >> >> >> >> I updated thedescription and changes are available in this webrev >> >> http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~jgeorge/sponsorships/8167294/webrev.01/ >> >> > I realize I suggested the wording for this but looking at it now then what > would you think about changing: > > "(because the java.desktop module is not readable)" to > > "(e.g. when the java.desktop module is not readable or when the runtime image > does not contain the java.desktop module)”
This version is better. Mandy
