One section I'd like to see improved is the readability of the Problem section. 
The middle sentence is long winded and hard to read. Perhaps a bullet list 
would be better.

Right you are.  I've revised it to use bullet points, and while I've added a 
bit more detail to each they should be easier to follow.  If not, let me know 
and I can do some condensing.

Jakob

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