Hi list, First off I understand you've produced some kick-ass software, and I'd like to use it myself! Unfortunately the first thing people see is not the great software, but the documentation. The documentation is definitely okay, but I think we can make some improvements, and I want to help!
I'm new to sheepdog and just started to read the Getting started guide. Most things I understand fine, but some things were a bit unclear and fuzzy. So I updated the wiki to reflect what I think you mean in a few places. Please review my changes (link below) so I'm not lying. ;) But there were other parts where I'm not confident enough to make any changes. Like these: > Usually sheepdog and QEMU are installed on every node, and the cluster > manager on three nodes. Should this maybe say "and the cluster manager on all nodes"? > Sheepdog has the back-end store to store the data object persistently > on the node basis. I don't really get this, could this be put in another way? > 2. Boot the virtual machine without sheep daemon started on local node > <pre> > $ qemu-system-x86_64 sheepdog:192.168.2.45:7000:Alice Should this be "Boot the virtual machine with sheepdog daemon running on a remote node"? Other points: o You use "sheepdog" and "Sheepdog" inconsistently, which one do you wish to use? I can probably update it if you let me know. o Some places says "sheep daemon", should this be "sheepdog daemon"? Again, just for the sake of consistency. Please review the changes I made here: https://github.com/sheepdog/sheepdog/wiki/Getting-Started/_compare/cbc8900aca247a619222425b09bf94538712264e...410e3b4f510f9f1bd73c5fd677a8ef6efea415d9 And please let me know if this is appreciated and if you are interested in more feedback like this. Thanks! BR, Björn Pettersson, @bjoernfan (I'm not on the list so please make sure I get a copy directly if you reply) -- sheepdog mailing list [email protected] http://lists.wpkg.org/mailman/listinfo/sheepdog
