Hey there :)

I feel a bit like I'm complaining each time I write to you guys, but
hey ! it's for a greater good :D

So there's a new website. It looks great. The 3D robot ninja looks very
cool. The theme looks professional. It's one great step taken ! Yet, I'm
a little puzzled. How do I phrase this without hurting anyone ?...

The guy who wrote the text obviously has a limited knowledge of English.
Each sentence, even in those nice big slides on the homepage, has either
spelling or grammatical mistakes that spoil the whole effect of the cool
graphics. I could help fixing most of those, but maybe an native speaker
reading this list could give us a hand ?

I'm sorry it might look like I only write to complain but his time maybe
I can help :)

Cheers,
-- 
Marc-Olivier Barre
Avencall
10 bis, rue Lucien Voilin - 92800 Puteaux
Tél.    : 0811 85 9486 (0811 85 XIVO)
http://www.avencall.com/


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