I have given it a quick read. Reads good. I support publication. Nit: BPKI acronym is used earlier but the expansion (Business 'PKI') is stated only in Section 2 for the first time. I think mentioning the expansion on first use of the acronym in the Introduction would be good -- you may take care of this nit during the RFC Editor review process. Thanks.
Sriram ________________________________________ From: sidr <[email protected]> on behalf of Sandra Murphy <[email protected]> Sent: Saturday, July 2, 2016 2:59 PM To: sidr Cc: Sandra Murphy Subject: [sidr] wglc for draft-ietf-sidr-rpki-oob-setup-04 The authors believe that draft-ietf-sidr-rpki-oob-setup-04 ("An Out-Of-Band Setup Protocol For RPKI Production Services”) is mature and ready for a working group last call. This message starts a two week wglc for draft-ietf-sidr-rpki-oob-setup-04, which will end 16 Jun 2016. Please review the draft and send comments and your opinion of whether it is worthy of publication to the list. Remember that support for publication is needed, and comments can improve quality, so lack of comments is not sufficient. You can reach the document at https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-sidr-rpki-oob-setup-04 and https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-sidr-rpki-oob-setup/. —Sandy, speaking as one of the wg co-chairs _______________________________________________ sidr mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/sidr
