Your entries titillate but do not gratify. They seem to promise a lot more to read - but end without fulfilling that promise.
I think you have the makings of an interesting writer - but need to trust yourself and flesh out your entries to fill a couple of screenfuls. And don't bother about what others think. Leave out the "external validation" / "log kya kahenge " / "naal pere yenna solvanga" factor and shoot from the hip. The blog is, after all, YOU. Just my thoughts shiv On Tue October 17 2006 7:48 am, Venkat Mangudi wrote: > I know I cannot get a better set of people to comment on my writing. So > here goes... > > If you folks can find some time and let me know how I can improve my > writing style on my blog (http://venkatmangudi.blogspot.com), it would > be very much appreciated. :-) > > Well, I thank you in advance for just commenting on the writing style. I > know without this disclaimer, I was looking at some serious lessons... > > cheers, > Venkat
