Here is a short (nonfiction) story about a fire call I responded to the other 
night.

I’ve recreated it from the twitter threat that was its original format.

Passing along to Silklist because (a) I think you might find the story 
interesting in itself & (b) it naturally causes me to reflect on the staccato, 
“just the facts, ma’am” style of storytelling that Twitter enforces. It’s an 
artificial constraint, but the discipline does really force you, I think, to 
learn how to be economical and direct. 

November 30 will be my last day as a firefighter.

Comments welcome.

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I'm a firefighter. I'm also a novelist. Had an interesting call last night. 
Prompted some big (for me, anyway) thoughts.  

No person or animal was injured; we saved the building and most of the 
contents. (There was water & smoke damage.) Still, it was tragic.

The call came in around 9 PM. I was home. Earlier that evening I had worked out 
at the firehouse, then attended a lecture on Checkov.

"Structure fire at [address]. Detached home office; flame visible." I got there 
just after the ladder truck, where my gear is stowed.

As I geared up some other firefighters were connecting a supply line to a 
hydrant; others were already attacking the fire.

I grabbed an air pack but Chief hollered to me, "Forget the pack. Give me some 
lights. Light up this scene!" So I began to do that.

The building on fire was downhill from the main house, across a lawn, 100 feet 
from the road. I dragged a power cord & light there, etc.

The fire was soon knocked down & the long process of "salvage & overhaul" 
began. A man and a woman watched from a porch on the house.

The man was the novelist Ward Just. Lost in the fire was the only manuscript of 
a novel he had been working on for 3 years. Gone. Ashes.

I had met him & his wife before, sat next tot them at a dinner party. There's 
lots more to the story but that's enough for now.

I wasn't going to make this public, Chief might not be happy with me, but a 
lost Ward Just novel is a big story, & he was a journalist.

I asked myself, If our positions were reversed, if he was the firefighter & I 
the famous writer, would Ward Just have tweeted this out?

I believe he would have. Further, this is just the kind of scenario that might 
appear in one of his novels. It's nearly Checkovian.

I offered condolences, helped disconnect hoses, etc, went back to station, 
helped but truck back in order, re-packed my gear.

Ward Just writes his novels on a manual typewriter. That also was ruined in the 
fire.

It was about 1:30 AM when I went to bed. Today I'm going to find a few hours to 
work on my latest novel. I'll back up my work. 

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jrs

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