Thanks for the comments. Brief replies below.

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Read it, and looks good except for a few truly minor nits. - sec 4, 1st sentence, for consistency seems the tag should be in quotes, ie "The "sip.ice" media feature tag ..."

- sec 6, 2nd paragraph, last sentence should read "... using the SIP*S* mechanism. " (Missing the S in SIPS)

Both fixed.


- sec 7.2, for consistency with sec 7.1 should the tag name be give simply by "Name: sip.ice" (or sec 7.1 spell it all out as in sec 7.2)

These two sections are based on different registries - one is for SIP option tags and the other for media feature tags. So the names are different.

Thanks,
Jonahtan R.

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