Here is another review. ________________________________ Von: ext Mayutan A. [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Gesendet: Mittwoch, 20. Juni 2007 09:45 An: Tschofenig, Hannes Betreff: Re: SIP SAML Comments
HI Hannes , I do not have any major comments on the SIP SAML draft. My comments are limited to spelling mistakes. Section 5 , sentence 1 "Because the those " is wrong. suggestion remove "the" section 6.1.2 , 2nd para , first sentence "Although this profile is overview" ... suggestion "profile's " section 6.1.3 , 3rd sentence , separate is spelt wrong section 6.3.1.1 , 3rd sentence "The particulars of how this is accomplished depend upon implementation.." sounds wrong .. suggestion "dependS upon THE" section 6.3.1.2 , last line proceeds is spelt wrongly section 6.3.1.3 , first line Makes more sense if the first line begins with THE 6.1.3.4 , 2nd sentence It has "the the" 6.1.4.1, attribute ID requirement is spelt wrong section 7.1, 3rd para this profile of the SAML URI Binding is congruent with the SAML URI binding ---- does not make sense Mayutan
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