1)      I am not convinced this document does updated RFC 4412. RFC 4412
creates the namespace. This document merely adds new items to the IANA
registry created by that document. The document header should be
modified accordingly, and the following text in the abstract also
corrected:

   This 
   document intends to update RFC 4412, as a Proposed Standard document
   if published by the RFC-Editor.

2)      I believe the abstract could usefully summarise the new
namespaces that are created (in the same way as most drafts that define
new headers identify them in the abstract).

3)      In section 3, I do not see the need to include the following
text in the document, as it is already in RFC 4412, for which all the
requirements apply, not just this one.

   As stated in Section 9 of RFC 4412 [RFC4412], an IANA registered 
   namespace SHOULD NOT change the number, and MUST NOT change the 
   relative priority order, of its assigned priority-values.

4)      NIT. Tag all mentions of RFC4412 as references.


Regards

Keith


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