From: "DRAGE, Keith \(Keith\)" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
1) Change section 1 from
Each will be RFC 4412 defined as preemption
based in nature, and will have the same 9 priority-values.
To
Each will be preemption
in nature, as defined in RFC 4412, and will have the same 9
priority-values.
I think the way you want to phrase that is "Each will use a preemption
policy, as defined in RFC 4412, ...". It would read even more easily
if you said "Each will be preemptive [in nature], ...", but
"preemptive" does not appear in RFC 4412. But "preemption policy" is
used in section 4.5.1.
Dale
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