From: "James M. Polk" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>

   At 10:04 PM 2/24/2008, [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
   >            Title           : IANA Registration of New Session
   >                              Initiation Protocol (SIP)
   >                              Resource-Priority Namespaces
   >            Author(s)       : J. Polk
   >            Filename        : draft-ietf-sip-rph-new-namespaces-02.txt
   >            Pages           : 7
   >            Date            : 2008-02-23
   >
   >    Abstract:
   >
   >    This document creates additional Session Initiation Protocol
   >    Resource-Priority namespaces, and places these namespaces in the
   >    IANA register.
   >
   >As an editorial matter, can the abstract be made less vague?  Such as
   >mentioning that it creates a set of namespaces for the use of the US
   >Defense Information Systems Agency...

   well, at least I didn't overstate things...  ;-)

   I can change this if you want me to

I've been sick and perhaps my message was a little short.  But when I
read the abstract, I realized that if I didn't already know what the
I-D was about, the abstract really wouldn't tell me.  It would be even
clearer to say something like "This document creates 40 additional SIP
... for the use of DISA."  But that might sound snarky, as people have
wondered what so many namespaces are needed for.

Dale
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