Hi Dean, I read this document and I have the following comments
1) Section 4.2 didn't mention any thing about contact header. Second para says "Anonymous IP addressed are needed for two purposes" those are via and address in SDP for media. Later section 5.1.1 refers back to section 4.2 So I would like to see some description about contact also in section 4.2. If anonymous IP address from STUN relay server is used for contact, I think all subsequent sip signaling has to go via STUN relay server. 2) Section 4.1 last para: what is third party GRUU server? (I assume its a registrar outside the domain?). Are there any SIP mechanisms to achieve the functionality described in this para? If yes, I like to see some description. If no, Please state some thing like mechanisms outside the scope of this document or this is for future standardization etc. 3) section 5.1.2 last para: Similar comments as point 2 above. Regards Krishna -----Original Message----- From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On Behalf Of Dean Willis Sent: den 5 november 2008 22:17 To: SIP IETF Subject: [Sip] Volunteer op: Request formal reviews for UA Initiated Privacy I'd like to request several people to review the UA Initiated Privacy draft in conjunction with the WGLC that we expect to start shortly. See: http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-sip-ua-privacy-03.txt Such reviews should look at: 1) Readability -- does the draft, as written, make sense? Are the examples clear? 2) Technical correctness: Are the recommendations of the draft valid? Are they consistent with our other specifications, and if not, does the draft clearly explain these inconsistencies and give a rationale? Each reviewer should write up an email addressing the review, and specifically any issues noted, and return that to this list. Please volunteer! -- Dean _______________________________________________ Sip mailing list https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/sip This list is for NEW development of the core SIP Protocol Use [EMAIL PROTECTED] for questions on current sip Use [EMAIL PROTECTED] for new developments on the application of sip _______________________________________________ Sip mailing list https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/sip This list is for NEW development of the core SIP Protocol Use [EMAIL PROTECTED] for questions on current sip Use [EMAIL PROTECTED] for new developments on the application of sip
