Some comments: Section 3.5.2 Joining, Leaving, and Maintenance Overview
Joining is discussed in depth, Leaving and Maintenance seem to be missing. Section 11, second message flow -- attach to neighbor peer Just before the TLS arrow from JP to NP, there's an extra arrow labelled 'Attach' to the NP. Why is this necessary? Didn't JP already obtain NP's ICE candidates in the preceding Attach exchange shown in the diagram? There's little text about leaving an overlay. Section 9 'Chord Algorithm' discusses it (9.8), but the algorithm- independent sections barely mention it. Regards, Wolfgang Beck Deutsche Telekom Netzproduktion GmbH Zentrum Technik Einführung Wolfgang Beck Heinrich-Hertz-Straße 3-7, 64295 Darmstadt +49 6151 628 2832 (Tel.) www.telekom.com Erleben, was verbindet. Deutsche Telekom Netzproduktion GmbH Aufsichtsrat: Dr. Steffen Roehn (Vorsitzender) Geschäftsführung: Dr. Bruno Jacobfeuerborn (Vorsitzender), Albert Matheis, Klaus Peren Handelsregister: Amtsgericht Bonn HRB 14190 Sitz der Gesellschaft: Bonn USt-IdNr. DE 814645262 _______________________________________________ P2PSIP mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/p2psip
