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On Mon, Aug 25, 2014 at 10:32 AM, Maria Cruz <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi team, > I am sending out a proposal for twitter, FB and G+ for this blogpost I > wrote last week. Let me know your thoughts. > > Link to blogpost: > https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/22/grants-programs-and-learning-at-wikimania-london/ > > Link to Social Media Calendar: > https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Social_media/Calendar#August_25 > > > *t: With 2000+ participants, #Wikimania2014 witnessed knowledge sharing on > many levels! Here's Grantmaking's insights: > https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/22/grants-programs-and-learning-at-wikimania-london/ > This is too long I think. I would remove "Here's" and just say something like, *t: With 2000+ participants, #Wikimania2014 witnessed knowledge sharing on many levels! Grantmaking insights: https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/08/22/grants-programs-and-learning-at-wikimania-london/ > > * F/G+: With over 2,000 participants, this year's Wikimania was the > scenario of multiple exchanges, on many levels. We now share the insights > from Grantmaking team. How did these conversations affect the current > course of work? What are some of the new challenges we are facing in > promoting Wikimedia programs? > "How did these conversations affect the current course of work" confuses tense a little bit when I read it. Would, "How will these conversations affect our work?" mean what you intend? > > Thanks! > > > *María Cruz * \\ Community Coordinator, PE&D Team \\ Wikimedia > Foundation, Inc. > [email protected] | : @marianarra_ <https://twitter.com/marianarra_> > > _______________________________________________ > Social-media mailing list > [email protected] > https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media > > -- Heather Walls Communications Design Manager WikimediaFoundation.org [email protected]
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