I'd remove the "Good for you" part, which could sound flippant, but otherwise LGTM!
On Mon, Jan 5, 2015 at 2:14 PM, Fabrice Florin <[email protected]> wrote: > Thanks, Katherine! > > Here’s some new copy with your proposed wording: > > Twitter (@wikimedia/@wikipedia): > > * Thanks to Wikimedia supporters for keeping knowledge free and accessible > on Wikipedia! > https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/01/05/thank-you-for-keeping-knowledge-free- > and-accessible/ link > > * Thanks to Wikimedia supporters for keeping knowledge free and accessible > on Wikipedia, surpassing our goals! > > https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/01/05/thank-you-for-keeping-knowledge-free-and-accessible/ > > > Facebook/Google+ > > * Thanks to Wikimedia supporters for keeping knowledge free and > accessible! In just a month, you surpassed our goals to help grow Wikipedia > and its sister projects. Good for you! :) (link) > > • Wikimedia supporters donated generously this holiday season to keep > knowledge free and accessible. Thanks for helping grow Wikipedia and its > sister projects! (link) > > > Cheers, > > > Fabrice > > > On Jan 5, 2015, at 1:31 PM, Katherine Maher <[email protected]> wrote: > > We actually raised more than $20M -- can we rewrite to remove the numbers, > and instead talk about "surpassing our goals"? Thanks! > > On Mon, Jan 5, 2015 at 1:18 PM, Fabrice Florin <[email protected]> > wrote: > >> Hi guys, >> >> Happy New Year! >> >> Here are proposed social media messages promoting this blog post, which >> we just published: >> >> >> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/01/05/thank-you-for-keeping-knowledge-free-and-accessible/ >> >> >> Twitter (@wikimedia/@wikipedia): >> >> * Thanks to Wikimedia supporters for keeping knowledge free and >> accessible on Wikipedia! >> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/01/05/thank-you-for-keeping-knowledge-free-and-accessible/ >> link >> >> * Thanks to Wikimedia supporters for keeping knowledge free and >> accessible on Wikipedia, donating more than $20M last month! >> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/01/05/thank-you-for-keeping-knowledge-free-and-accessible/ >> >> >> Facebook/Google+ >> >> * Thanks to Wikimedia supporters for keeping knowledge free and >> accessible! In just a month, you donated more than $20M to help grow >> Wikipedia and its sister projects. Good for you! :) (link) >> >> • Wikimedia supporters donated generously this holiday season to keep >> knowledge free and accessible. Thanks for helping grow Wikipedia and >> its sister projects! (link) >> >> >> Tweak as you see fit. :) >> >> All the best, >> >> >> Fabrice >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Social-media mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media >> >> > > > -- > Katherine Maher > Chief Communications Officer > Wikimedia Foundation > 149 New Montgomery Street > San Francisco, CA 94105 > > +1 (415) 839-6885 ext. 6635 > +1 (415) 712 4873 > [email protected] > _______________________________________________ > Social-media mailing list > [email protected] > https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media > > > > _______________________________________________ > Social-media mailing list > [email protected] > https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media > > -- Katherine Maher Chief Communications Officer Wikimedia Foundation 149 New Montgomery Street San Francisco, CA 94105 +1 (415) 839-6885 ext. 6635 +1 (415) 712 4873 [email protected]
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