Thanks, Joe. Yes, please tweak as needed.
I just wanted to start the thread, so we don’t forget. We're in an offsite today, so didn’t have a lot of time to make the copy perfect :) -f > On Jan 21, 2015, at 1:17 PM, Joe Sutherland <[email protected]> wrote: > > Hi, > > I love the report! Some comments on the wording below... > > On 21 January 2015 at 9:08:17 pm, Fabrice Florin ([email protected] > <mailto:[email protected]>) wrote: > >> Hey social media team, >> >> We just published a blog post about the making of the annual report, by our >> own Heather Walls: >> >> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/01/21/annual-report/ >> >> Congrats again to Heather and everyone who worked on this absolutely >> wonderful report :) >> >> >> Here are some ideas for how to spread the word on social networks: >> >> >> Twitter (@wikimedia/@wikipedia): >> >> Today, WMF launched our 7th Annual Report. Here’s the story of how it was >> created. (link) > > This is really weird to my ears. “WMF” is a thing, and combining it with > “our” is a mismatch in this instance. If we’re tweeting from @wikimedia, then > I’d suggest “we” instead of “WMF”. Otherwise, try “...WMF launched its…”? > >> >> Facebook/Google+ >> >> Today, WMF launched our 7th Annual Report. This year’s theme: knowledge is a >> foundation. Here’s the story of how this report was created. >> (link) > > I like the snappiness, but my above point still stands for this. > > Joe > >> >> Please help us get the word out about this story :) >> >> Thanks! >> >> >> Fabrice >> _______________________________________________ >> Social-media mailing list >> [email protected] >> https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media > > > -- > Joe Sutherland > Communications Volunteer > m: +44 7722 916 433 | t: @jrbsu > <http://twitter.com/jrbsu>_______________________________________________ > Social-media mailing list > [email protected] > https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media
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