Hi,

Thanks for publishing.

There are a bunch of little errors there, and it would be really nice to
fix them:

* "but also to interest other departments in the University" -> "but also
to interest other departments in the University *in this*"
* "I asked the Xhosa-speaking audience members what do they thought about
the text" -> "I asked the Xhosa-speaking audience members *what did they
think* about the text" or "I asked the Xhosa-speaking audience members *what
do they think* about the text"
* "This is a taste of the things to come, which Content Translation makes
easier than ever. More content can be created in more languages with less
effort." - something feels disconnected here. I'd rewrite it like this:
"This is a taste of the things to come. With Content Translation, more
content can be created in more languages with less effort."


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Amir Elisha Aharoni‏ ። אָמִיר אֱלִישָׁע אַהֲרוֹנִי
Language Engineering‏ ። הַנְדָּסָה לְשׁוֹנִית
Wikimedia Foundation‏ ። קֶרֶן וִיקִימֶדְיָה

2015-07-08 7:58 GMT+03:00 Joe Sutherland <[email protected]>:

> Hey all,
>
> We just published "Getting newcomers into Wikipedia with Content
> Translation" to the blog. URL:
>
> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/07/07/new-wikipedia-translators/
>
> Many thanks to Amir and the language engineering team for drafting this
> post.
>
> Below are some proposed social media messages. Please tweak as needed.
>
> *Twitter (@wikimedia):*
>
> • #ContentTranslation is changing the way people access and use Wikipedia.
> (link)
>
> *NOTE: Possibly a mention of @WhatToTranslate?*
>
> *Facebook/Google+:*
>
> • The Content Translation tool is helping all speakers of African
> languages to embrace modern technology to improve the online educational
> content in their languages. (link)
>
> • Our Content Translation tool was released as a beta feature on all
> Wikipedias this week, and has already been successfully field-tested in
> South Africa. (link)
>
> thanks,
> Joe
>
> --
> *Joe Sutherland*
> Communications Intern [remote]
> m: +44 (0) 7722 916 433 | t: @jrbsu <http://twitter.com/jrbsu> | w:
> JSutherland <https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/User:JSutherland_(WMF)>
>
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