Round 1 this time is Cecil since it's the oldest story.

FB: https://www.facebook.com/wikipedia/posts/10153435478343346

@Wikipedia: https://twitter.com/Wikipedia/status/629324230904184833
@Wikimedia: https://twitter.com/Wikimedia/status/629324230916722690

WP G+:
https://plus.google.com/u/0/b/100123345029543043288/+Wikipedia/posts/ZX26UXbmxAa
WMF G+:
https://plus.google.com/u/0/b/108193079736330787108/108193079736330787108/posts/Drvz3qWsmKU

On 6 August 2015 at 03:23, Ed Erhart <[email protected]> wrote:

> For Omar, Joe and I previously discussed trying to jump on John Oliver's
> social pull.... and I nearly forget to get him the quotes to do so. My
> suggestions:
>
> The outside world knows very little about former Taliban leader Mohammed
> Omar, so little that it just found out he died two years ago. The US
> government, as <link>John Oliver</link> noted on Sunday, had "vivid
> descriptions" of him, including "hair: black" and "height: tall."
>
> Shorter:
> As John Oliver noted last Sunday, the US government was able to come up
> with "vivid descriptions" of former Taliban leader Mohammed Omar, including
> "hair: black" and "height: tall."
>
> Shortest:
> As John Oliver noted last Sunday, former Taliban leader Mohammed Omar "had
> been dead for two years, and [they] simply hadn't mentioned it.
>
> Best,
> --Ed
>
> On Wed, Aug 5, 2015 at 8:09 PM, James Alexander <[email protected]>
> wrote:
>
>> Nice! Comments in line.
>>
>> James Alexander
>> Community Advocacy
>> Wikimedia Foundation
>> (415) 839-6885 x6716 @jamesofur
>>
>> On Wed, Aug 5, 2015 at 5:56 PM, Joe Sutherland <[email protected]
>> > wrote:
>>
>>> Hey all,
>>>
>>> We just published "News on Wikipedia: Beijing wins Winter Olympics,
>>> MH370 wreckage recovered, and more" to the Wikimedia blog. URL:
>>>
>>> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/08/05/beijing-olympics-mh370-wreckage/
>>>
>>> We plan to send out five pieces of social for this story, spread through
>>> the next *three days* (or thereabouts) to keep things timely.
>>>
>>> Please do comment for tone.
>>>
>>> *Twitter:*
>>>
>>> • China's capital Beijing will host the 2022 Winter Olympics.
>>> #NewsOnWikipedia
>>>
>> LGTM
>>
>> [Sidenote - this is going to make the mental disambiguation of saying
>> "Beijing Olympics" in my head really annoying]
>>
>>
>>> • Barack Obama (@potus) announced his Clean Power Plan this week.
>>> #cleanpower #NewsOnWikipedia
>>>
>>
>> LGTM
>>
>>
>>> • Wreckage found on French island Réunion is from missing plane #MH370.
>>> #NewsOnWikipedia
>>>
>>
>> Perhaps "French territory *of *Réunion" ? That sounds better to me but
>> I'm not actually sure if it's more correct/better. You'll know the grammar
>> side better then I :). Otherwise LGTM
>>
>>
>>> • Zimbabwe have requested the extradition of an American hunter for
>>> #Cecil's killing. #NewsOnWikipedia
>>> • Secretive Taliban leader Mohammed Omar actually died in 2013.
>>> #NewsOnWikipedia
>>>
>>
>> Both LGTM
>>
>>
>>> *Facebook/G+:*
>>>
>>> • Beijing beat out Almaty of Kazakhstan to become the host city for the
>>> 2022 Winter Olympics this week. #NewsOnWikipedia
>>>
>>
>> Hmmmm.... I'm torn between "Almaty of Kazakhstan" (which sounds awesome
>> but kinda sounds like an aristocratic name to me) and "Almaty, Kazakhstan".
>> Happy with either, otherwise LGTM
>>
>> • Barack Obama unveiled his Clean Power Plan this week. #NewsOnWikipedia
>>>
>>
>> LGTM
>>
>> • Plane parts found on the French territory Réunion were this week
>>> confirmed as from missing Malaysia Airlines Flight 370. #NewsOnWikipedia
>>>
>>
>> Same "of" question as above, otherwise LGTM
>>
>> • Zimbabwe last week requested the extradition of American hunter Walter
>>> Palmer following the killing of Cecil the lion. #NewsOnWikipedia
>>>
>>
>> perhaps "f*ormally* requested the extradition" ? (I'm not actually sure
>> that's true but I think it is? Just thinking that's different then some of
>> the random statements they mentioned about wanting extradition earlier).
>> Otherwise LGTM
>>
>>
>>> • Currently, only two images exist of former Taliban leader Mohammed
>>> Omar. This week it was confirmed that he died two years ago.
>>> #NewsOnWikipedia
>>>
>>>
>> Hmm, I'm happy with this one (I like the images fact) but worry that it
>> could feel like a bit of a non sequitur. Perhaps tying it together with
>> something like:
>>
>>
>>    - Currently, only two images exist of former Taliban leader Mohammed
>>    Omar. *It's likely to stay that way unless more are found because t*his
>>    week it was confirmed that he died two years ago. #NewsOnWikipedia
>>
>> best,
>>> Joe
>>>
>>> --
>>> *Joe Sutherland*
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>>>
>>>
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> Ed Erhart
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