Thanks all! My concern with the more specific version is that the average user might not know what those features mean without further explanation. With product descriptions we should use simple, clear language as much as possible. Also it would be good to make it clear up front that this is for Android only.
What about something like: Are you an Android user? Check out the updated Wikipedia app for Android--now with improved article browsing and language selection! On Wednesday, August 12, 2015, Dmitry Brant <[email protected]> wrote: > So, originally my thinking was that tabbed browsing is a very fundamental > feature that should have been part of the app from the very beginning, so I > was afraid that for us to loudly announce it at this point might be > perceived as unwarranted horn-tooting... > But looking at the latest Play Store reviews, it looks like the users are > responding very positively to it (comparing to the previous version), so I > wouldn't be opposed to mentioning tabbed browsing explicitly. > > I'm happy to leave it in Comms' capable hands to decide! (I kind of like > James's first suggestion) > > > On Tue, Aug 11, 2015 at 10:29 PM, James Alexander < > [email protected] > <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','[email protected]');>> wrote: > >> Looks good overall but if you wanted a bit more spice maybe something >> like: >> >> Tabbed browsing, faster language switching & more! Android users, now is >> the time to check out our newly updated app >> https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=org.wikipedia&hl=en >> >> Or >> >> >> Tabbed browsing & faster language switching are just some of the new >> improvements to our newly updated android app. >> https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=org.wikipedia&hl=en >> >> Sent from my iPhone >> >> >> James Alexander >> Legal and Community Advocacy >> Wikimedia Foundation >> +1 415-839-6885 x6716 >> >> >> On Aug 11, 2015, at 19:31, Juliet Barbara <[email protected] >> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','[email protected]');>> wrote: >> >> Thank you! I know it's not the most exciting language, so if others have >> ideas please throw them out. :) >> >> On Tue, Aug 11, 2015 at 5:25 PM, Joe Sutherland < >> [email protected] >> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','[email protected]');>> wrote: >> >>> This looks good to me. Michael or I can get it out tomorrow perhaps. >>> >>> Joe >>> >>> On 12 August 2015 at 01:04, Juliet Barbara <[email protected] >>> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','[email protected]');>> wrote: >>> >>>> Hi everyone, >>>> >>>> Can we promote the latest updates to the Android app on social? An idea >>>> below to get us started. Thanks! >>>> >>>> *Facebook/Twitter* >>>> >>>> Do you have an Android device? Check out the latest updates to the >>>> Wikipedia Android app! >>>> https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=org.wikipedia&hl=en >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> _______________________________________________ >>>> Social-media mailing list >>>> [email protected] >>>> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','[email protected]');> >>>> https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media >>>> >>>> >>> >>> >>> -- >>> *Joe Sutherland* >>> Communications Intern [remote] >>> m: +44 (0) 7722 916 433 | t: @jrbsu <http://twitter.com/jrbsu> | w: >>> JSutherland <https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/User:JSutherland_(WMF)> >>> >>> _______________________________________________ >>> Social-media mailing list >>> [email protected] >>> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','[email protected]');> >>> https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media >>> >>> >> >> >> -- >> *Juliet Barbara* >> Senior Communications Manager I Wikimedia Foundation >> 149 New Montgomery Street I San Francisco, CA 94105 >> [email protected] >> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','[email protected]');> I +1 (512) >> 750-5677 >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Social-media mailing list >> [email protected] >> <javascript:_e(%7B%7D,'cvml','[email protected]');> >> https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media >> >> > > > -- > Dmitry Brant > Product Owner (Android), Mobile Apps Team > Wikimedia Foundation > https://www.mediawiki.org/wiki/Wikimedia_mobile_engineering > > -- *Juliet Barbara* Senior Communications Manager I Wikimedia Foundation 149 New Montgomery Street I San Francisco, CA 94105 [email protected] I +1 (512) 750-5677
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