On Sun, Oct 18, 2015 at 9:27 PM, Jeff Elder <[email protected]> wrote:

> Hoping to get some things scheduled if anyone is around to eyeball these.
>
> Tweet:
> Did you know? The marriage of Thomas Thynne of Longleat may have helped to
> inspire Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet. http://buff.ly/1LZzul5
>

LGTM. [though I'm going to go edit that article after this... there are a
couple things bothering me about the wording and sourcing ;) ]


> Tweet:
> Find out what happens when a journalist edits Wikipedia in a famous
> Argentine opera house. http://buff.ly/1LZBWrN
>
>
LGTM (on a side note it might be nice to link the author's newspaper in the
signature area newspaper or his name to his articles in the paper/his
twitter or something... seems weird to have it completely unlinked.)

Tweet:
> Elmer Stricklett is considered to have been the first baseball pitcher to
> master the spitball. http://buff.ly/1ZPFnW2
>

LGTM ( Yes, not everyone will know what a spitball is...  that's the
point... I didn't but was now I do ... yes I now realize this is different
then what I said yesterday about the 'open era' of tennis ... I would argue
this is easier to find from the link then that was but ... for the record
I'm thinking about my biases!)

Tweet:
> Valerie Bettis was the first modern dance choreographer to work with a
> major ballet company. http://buff.ly/1LZCWfr
>

LGTM


> Facebook:
> Florence Violet McKenzie, Australia's first female electrical engineer and
> a lifelong promoter for technical education for women, helped to introduce
> women into the Australian military and taught Morse code to thousands of
> sailors free of charge. http://buff.ly/1OD3hAs
>

"promoter for" or "Promoter of" ? It sounds better to me with 'of' but
every single person in comms (and most on this list I imagine) is better at
grammar then I am :). Otherwise LGTM
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