Nice work!

If I could criticize something it would be the lighting or maybe contrast
in some pieces.
Some sculptures are just too dark and losing details because of that. A
little more work in the lights or post retouching contrast / levels could
make them look even better.

Another thing, some pics and/or layout are just too small. You have very
nice detailed pieces there, so I think you should sell more your character
details. In some pieces you have a few pics a little redundant showing
something very similar and/or similar angles when you could use that space
with some close up details.

The long shots are useful to show the character balance, general anatomy
knowledge, outline balance, lightning and composition sense, and makes me
think, well this guy know his job!, but the nice close up details are the
ones that blow my mind and makes me think this guy loves his job!

Although I don't think anyone really care about it, wireframes with
antialiasing would look better.

Cheers

M.Yara


On Thu, Aug 15, 2013 at 1:07 AM, Rares Halmagean <[email protected]>wrote:

>  Nice work Szabolcs. Minimal click website layout with the primary
> categories on the front with images to grab the viewer as an effective
> portfolio should be (unlike mine). +1 on the sketches and and space between
> menu and images.
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> On 8/14/2013 5:44 AM, Szabolcs Matefy wrote:
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>  Hey folks, sorry for the offtopic stuff, but I need some feedback on my
> works…Here’s my portfolio:****
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> http://szmatefy.wix.com/szabolcsmatefy****
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> It’s done with Softimage and ZBrush, and Photoshop (so it’s semi OT :D )**
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> Please let me know, what to improve (even the site, etc)****
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> Cheers****
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> Szabolcs****
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> *Rares Halmagean
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