I have reviewed the new draft per my earlier comments, and I believe it
is now ready to move forward. I have requested an IETF Last Call to be
initiated.
I did have a couple of editorial notes that you may want to deal with in
the mean time:
technology: the B4 and the AFTR. It will then go into networking and
Acronyms used before definition / expansion.
The AFTR MUST drop all
others packets.
s/all others/all other/
== Outdated reference: A later version (-10) exists of
draft-ietf-softwire-ds-lite-tunnel-option-09
== Outdated reference: A later version (-05) exists of
draft-ietf-intarea-shared-addressing-issues-04
== Outdated reference: A later version (-07) exists of
draft-ietf-pcp-base-06
== Outdated reference: A later version (-06) exists of
draft-nishitani-cgn-05
Please update.
== There are 15 instances of lines with non-RFC5735-compliant IPv4
addresses in the document. If these are example addresses, they should
be changed.
Please check (this is probably fine).
Jari
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