Leaf, thanks for your comments, I will incorporate those together with the comments received by Xing Li.
> The new draft (-02) is more readable to me than before, but it still sounds > not complete yet. what do you think isn't complete? I didn't see that reflected in your comments. > The attached is my copy revisions after the quick reading, just for your > reference to the progress of the text. > If there is anything shows my understanding is wrong or not perfect, pls. > feel free to indicate. Best regards, Ole > > > Best Regards, > Leaf > > > -----Original Message----- > From: Xing Li [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Saturday, December 03, 2011 12:29 PM > To: Ole Troan > Cc: [email protected] team; softwires > Subject: Re: Revision 02 > > Hi, Ole, > > Thank you very much for your work. Attached please find our additional > comments and suggestions for draft-mdt-softwire-mapping-address-and-port-02 > > Regards, > > xing, congxiao > > > > <draft-mdt-softwire-mapping-address-and-port-02-Leaf-C-1112.pdf> _______________________________________________ Softwires mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires
