Hi authors,
  I reviewed this document and I found that it is not ready for
advancement. The MIB is not even properly formed to start off with and
hence the MIB cannot be compiled and checked for validity. I found a few
obvious fatal errors that need to be fixed.

DEFINITIONS is spelled wrongly as DEFFINITIONS and this means that the
MIB is not even recognized. After this is fixed, the MIB could be
extracted but there was a syntax error.

I found out was caused by a missing comma after "natAddrMapGlobalPortTo"
in Page 6.

Further errors

There is a space between "::" and "=" in several of the definitions
again causing an error each time.

In summary, this MIB has a bunch of errors that need to be fixed before
it can be advanced. Authors please submit a new version with the fixes
after verifying its correctness using a MIB validator of your choice.

Thanks
Suresh
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