Tom, Wojciech, thanks, fixed.
Best regards, Ole On 22 Nov 2013, at 11:40 , Wojciech Dec <[email protected]> wrote: > Seems like an editing error resulted in this dangling sentence. The > corresponding text in draft -04 read as shown below, and I suggest we > reinstate the "discard the option" behaviour: > > The MAP algorithm, as per Section 5.1 [I-D.ietf-softwire-map > ], allows > the port-indexing algorithm to be parametrized in terms of an > excluded port range (a-bits) and an explicit Port Set ID (PSID) > value, which can be conveyed via the S46 Port Parameters Option . > The following behaviour is expected when processing this option by > MAP clients: A client receiving a S46 Port parameters Option in an > OPTION_S46_BRULE or OPTION_S46_FRULE whose derived IPv4 address is > not 32 bit-long MUST discard the option. The formula for this check > is "prefix4-len + ea-len == 32". This is to ensure that the explicit > PSID is only applied to configurations with a completely formed IPv4 > address. > > > > > On 22 November 2013 03:00, Tom Taylor <[email protected]> wrote: > Just realized that the option will be provided only if no EA bits were > present in the BMR. Hence the test as it stands is correct. The sentence > fragment still needs expansion or deletion. Wonder if we need text saying > what to do if prefix4-len + ea-len > 32 and the option is also present? > > Tom > > On 21/11/2013 8:54 PM, Tom Taylor wrote: > The text describing client validation of OPTION_S46_PORTPARAMS in the > second-last paragraph of Section 4.5 currently reads as follows: > > When receiving the Port Parameters option with an explicit PSID, the > client MUST use this explicit PSID in configuring its MAP interface. > If the conveyed IPv4 address is not 32 bit-long. The formula for > this check is "prefix4-len + ea-len = 32" and serves to ensure > that the explicit PSID is only applied to configurations with a > completely formed IPv4 address. > > I don't think the sentence fragment "If the conveyed IPv4 address ..." > should be there. In the subsequent sentence, I believe the check must be: > > "prefix4-len + ea-len > 32" > > Otherwise no port values are conveyed by the option. See Section 5.2 of > the MAP document, particularly Figure 6 and associated text. > > I would also add "shared and" before "completely formed" at the end of > the paragraph. > > Tom Taylor > _______________________________________________ > Softwires mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires > > _______________________________________________ > Softwires mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires
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