Hi Ian, thanks for the feedback...
On 27 February 2014 20:06, Ian Farrer <[email protected]> wrote: > I support this moving forward, with a few small comments: > > 1, A few instances where "packets'" should be "packet's" throughout the > doc (e.g. 8.2, 8.3) > > Fixed - I'll reword some of the text to remove the possessive. Also noticed an inconsistency or two. > 2, Section 5.1 para 2, line 2 'as' is mis-spelt as "s". > Ok. > > 3, Section 8.1 "The source address and port of the packet obtained as a > result of the NAPT44 process > MUST correspond to the source IPv4 address and source transport port > number derived > to belong to the CE by means of the the MAP Basic Mapping Rule (BR)." > > > Reads as if there is only a single transport port allocated to the client. > Wouldn't something like 'IPv4 address and a valid source transport port...' > be more accurate? > I'll change it to: The source address and source port-range of packets resulting from the NAPT44 processing MUST correspond to the source IPv4 address and source transport port-range assigned to the CE by means of the MAP Basic Mapping Rule (BMR). Cheers, Wojciech > > Cheers, > Ian > > On 14 Feb 2014, at 06:49, Suresh Krishnan <[email protected]> > wrote: > > > Hi all, > > This message starts a two week softwire working group last call on > advancing the draft about providing Mapping of Address and Port using > Translation as an Experimental RFC. The authors believe that this version > has addressed all the issues raised on the document till date. The latest > version of the draft is available at > > > > http://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-softwire-map-t-05.txt > > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-softwire-map-t-05 > > > > Substantive comments and statements of support/opposition for advancing > this document should be directed to the mailing list. Editorial suggestions > can be sent directly to the authors. This last call will conclude on > February 28, 2014 > > > > Regards, > > Suresh & Yong > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > Softwires mailing list > > [email protected] > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires > > _______________________________________________ > Softwires mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires >
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