Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib-12: No Record
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-mib/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- - section 5.1, first two sentences: The text can be interpreted to mean the subtree is the mechanism for that negotiation. I assume that's not the intent? -5.1, last sentence: I don't understand; what different tunnel? -8, paragraph 6: Do the 2119 keywords in this paragaph represent new requirements specified in this draft, or do they describe existing requirements from SNMPv3? If the latter, please use descriptive language rather than 2119 keywords. -5.1, Third sentence: Missing article before "Softwire mesh framework...". _______________________________________________ Softwires mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires
