> On Sep 15, 2018, at 11:40 AM, 杨术 <[email protected]> wrote:
> 
> Thank you for your useful advices, we add draft-ietf-intarea-tunnel  as a 
> reference
> for fragment technology and ttl configuration. 
> 
> We have uploaded a new version: 
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast-23 
> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-softwire-mesh-multicast-23>
> 
> Best Regards,
> 
> Shu Yang

Some suggestions:

TTL:
- should refer to “TTL or hop count” (IPv6 calls this hop count because it no 
longer intends to reflect time, as was originally intended for IPv4)
- upon encapsulation, the outer header TTL/hopcount should be set by policy 
(not technology), i.e., “as desired”
- upon decapsulation, the inner header TTL/hopcount should be modified by 
policy as well. it might be useful to suggest that the inner one never be 
incremented and that it might be decremented to reflect the cost of tunnel 
forwarding, but it need not be modified at all

Fragmentation:
I’ve never seen “COULD” used this way and it’s incorrect. They ARE described in 
that draft.
It would be more correct, IMO, to say:

          The specific requirements for 
           fragmentation and tunnel configuration SHOULD follow the 
recommendations in
           [I-D.ietf-intarea-tunnels].

Joe
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