Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-softwire-yang-?? Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date: 2018-12-29 IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-11 IESG Telechat date: 2019-01-10 Summary: Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. From my previous review - Ian responded that this will be addressed but I did not see that it was: In section 1 it says that the YANG data model can be used with netconf , I noticed that restconf is only mentioned in the security section as network management. why not add restconf to introduction? 2. In section 2 " The adopts the Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA)" there is a word missing? _______________________________________________ Softwires mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires
