Hi Roman, Fixed those in my local copy. Thank you.
Cheers, Med > -----Message d'origine----- > De : Roman Danyliw via Datatracker [mailto:nore...@ietf.org] > Envoyé : mercredi 12 juin 2019 03:26 > À : The IESG > Cc : draft-ietf-softwire-map-rad...@ietf.org; Yong Cui; Ian Farrer; > softwire-cha...@ietf.org; ianfar...@gmx.com; softwires@ietf.org > Objet : Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-softwire-map-radius-24: > (with COMMENT) > > Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-softwire-map-radius-24: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-softwire-map-radius/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > A few editorial nits: > > -- Section 3. Per “Depending on the deployment scenario …”, this sentence > doesn’t parse for me. I think s/so// would address it. > > -- Section 3.1.4.2. Typo. s/pecifies/specifies/ > _______________________________________________ Softwires mailing list Softwires@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/softwires
