Module Name: src
Committed By: martin
Date: Fri May 28 13:55:25 UTC 2021
Modified Files:
src/distrib/notes/amd64: hardware
src/distrib/notes/common: sysinst
Log Message:
PR 55413: 64-bit and OK police; grammar improvements.
>From Michael Siegel.
To generate a diff of this commit:
cvs rdiff -u -r1.1 -r1.2 src/distrib/notes/amd64/hardware
cvs rdiff -u -r1.111 -r1.112 src/distrib/notes/common/sysinst
Please note that diffs are not public domain; they are subject to the
copyright notices on the relevant files.
Modified files:
Index: src/distrib/notes/amd64/hardware
diff -u src/distrib/notes/amd64/hardware:1.1 src/distrib/notes/amd64/hardware:1.2
--- src/distrib/notes/amd64/hardware:1.1 Sun Aug 21 18:35:26 2005
+++ src/distrib/notes/amd64/hardware Fri May 28 13:55:24 2021
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-.\"$NetBSD: hardware,v 1.1 2005/08/21 18:35:26 riz Exp $
+.\"$NetBSD: hardware,v 1.2 2021/05/28 13:55:24 martin Exp $
.
.Nx*M
-supports CPUs that implement the 64bit AMD64 architecture.
+supports CPUs that implement the 64-bit AMD64 architecture.
These currently include AMD Opteron, AMD Athlon64, and Intel CPUs that
implement the EM64T extension.
Index: src/distrib/notes/common/sysinst
diff -u src/distrib/notes/common/sysinst:1.111 src/distrib/notes/common/sysinst:1.112
--- src/distrib/notes/common/sysinst:1.111 Thu May 27 15:47:42 2021
+++ src/distrib/notes/common/sysinst Fri May 28 13:55:24 2021
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\" $NetBSD: sysinst,v 1.111 2021/05/27 15:47:42 martin Exp $
+.\" $NetBSD: sysinst,v 1.112 2021/05/28 13:55:24 martin Exp $
.\"
.\" Copyright (c) 1999-2012 The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.
.\" All rights reserved.
@@ -509,7 +509,7 @@ See the section on
When prompted, choose
.Me CD-ROM
as the install medium if booted from CD-ROM.
-The default values for the path and device should be ok.
+The default values for the path and device should be OK.
.if \n[amd64]:\n[i386] \{\
If you booted using a USB image, choose
.Me Local directory .
@@ -745,7 +745,7 @@ It will also include instructions for us
.Pp
If you do not intend to use networking during the installation,
but you do want your machine to be configured for networking once
-it is installed, you should first go to the
+the system is installed, you should first go to the
.Me Utility menu
and select the
.Me Configure network
@@ -1287,7 +1287,7 @@ the option to install a bootselector, wh
to pick the operating system to start up when your computer
is (re-)started.
.Pp
-If everything is ok, you can go on to the next step,
+If everything is OK, you can go on to the next step,
editing the
.Nx
disklabel.
