Module Name:    src
Committed By:   wiz
Date:           Fri Dec  2 14:38:52 UTC 2011

Modified Files:
        src/share/man/man4/man4.x86: tprof_amdpmi.4 tprof_pmi.4

Log Message:
Wording improvements.


To generate a diff of this commit:
cvs rdiff -u -r1.1 -r1.2 src/share/man/man4/man4.x86/tprof_amdpmi.4 \
    src/share/man/man4/man4.x86/tprof_pmi.4

Please note that diffs are not public domain; they are subject to the
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Modified files:

Index: src/share/man/man4/man4.x86/tprof_amdpmi.4
diff -u src/share/man/man4/man4.x86/tprof_amdpmi.4:1.1 src/share/man/man4/man4.x86/tprof_amdpmi.4:1.2
--- src/share/man/man4/man4.x86/tprof_amdpmi.4:1.1	Fri Dec  2 12:17:51 2011
+++ src/share/man/man4/man4.x86/tprof_amdpmi.4	Fri Dec  2 14:38:51 2011
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"	$NetBSD: tprof_amdpmi.4,v 1.1 2011/12/02 12:17:51 yamt Exp $
+.\"	$NetBSD: tprof_amdpmi.4,v 1.2 2011/12/02 14:38:51 wiz Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c)2011 YAMAMOTO Takashi,
 .\" All rights reserved.
@@ -42,11 +42,11 @@ The
 driver is a
 .Xr tprof 4
 backend driver, which uses performance-monitoring events available for
-some of AMD processors.
+some AMD processors.
 .Pp
 It programs the processors so that "CPU Clocks not Halted" events
-(event select 0x76) to raise NMIs and the NMI handler collects
-a sample.
+(event select 0x76) to raise NMIs and the NMI handler collect
+samples.
 .\" ------------------------------------------------------------
 .\".Sh EXAMPLES
 .\" ------------------------------------------------------------
Index: src/share/man/man4/man4.x86/tprof_pmi.4
diff -u src/share/man/man4/man4.x86/tprof_pmi.4:1.1 src/share/man/man4/man4.x86/tprof_pmi.4:1.2
--- src/share/man/man4/man4.x86/tprof_pmi.4:1.1	Fri Dec  2 12:17:51 2011
+++ src/share/man/man4/man4.x86/tprof_pmi.4	Fri Dec  2 14:38:51 2011
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"	$NetBSD: tprof_pmi.4,v 1.1 2011/12/02 12:17:51 yamt Exp $
+.\"	$NetBSD: tprof_pmi.4,v 1.2 2011/12/02 14:38:51 wiz Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c)2011 YAMAMOTO Takashi,
 .\" All rights reserved.
@@ -45,8 +45,8 @@ backend driver, which uses performance-m
 Intel Pentium 4 (NetBurst) processors.
 .Pp
 It programs the processors so that global_power_events events
-(ESCR Event Select = 0x13) to raise NMIs and the NMI handler collects
-a sample.
+(ESCR Event Select = 0x13) to raise NMIs and the NMI handler collect
+samples.
 .\" ------------------------------------------------------------
 .\".Sh EXAMPLES
 .\" ------------------------------------------------------------

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