On 12/12/06, Joaquin Miller <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > How about one of these: > >> When a message is sent as a POST, OpenID parameters MUST be sent only in >> the POST body and the parameters processed MUST be only those from the POST >> body. > >> When a message is sent as a POST, OpenID parameters MUST be sent only in >> and processed only from the POST body. > > Instead of: > >> When a message is sent as a POST, OpenID parameters MUST only be sent in and >> processed from the POST body. > > (I feel the first of the two alternative above captures the intention much > better. We are aiming to make each clause of this document clear for folks > who don't already know what we have in mind, right?)
I think Johnny's wording is fine, but if it were to be changed, I would prefer the second of the two alternatives that you proposed. Josh _______________________________________________ specs mailing list specs@openid.net http://openid.net/mailman/listinfo/specs
