Hi, This is a useful and very well-written document. I have some minor comments and possible syntax corrections for the authors.
Minor: ------ In my opinion, the document should further explain if it's proposing a new system or outlining what must be there in existing systems. Do we want to implement such a data plane validation or enhance/reuse BFD for that purpose? Note in Page 5: Why will the PMS host not be part of MPLS domain? Isn't it given because a) solution applies to IGP and host will be part of IGP, and b) The top label is for path from PMS to LER I so there is an MPLS path there Paragraph 1, Page 8: "The PMS further could be enabled to send MPLS OAM packets with the label stack and address information identical to those of the monitoring packets to any node of the MPLS domain". Can you please clarify this? I don't understand the use case. Section 6 mentions the applicability of this solution for LDP but leaves out RSVP-TE tunnels. Won't it also be beneficial in monitoring active RSVP-TE tunnels as well? Syntax: ------- Paragraph 2 on Page 3 should read "This document describes a system of using MPLS data plane pat monitoring capabilities" instead of "This document describes illustrates a system of using MPLS data plane pat monitoring capabilities" Paragraph 2, Page 3: Change "The use case introduced here" to "The use cases introduced here" Paragraph 5, Page 3: Shouldn't it read "pre-Segment Routing (SR) based technology" instead of "pre-Segment based Routing (SR) technology"? Paragraph 5, Page 3: Change "domains complete MPLS topology" to "domain's complete MPLS topology" Paragraph 5, Page 3: Change "domains forwarding plane" to "domain's forwarding plane" Paragraph 2, Page 4: Change "recongise an execute" to "recognise and execute" Paragraph 4, Page 4: Change "The MPLS path monitoring system may be a any server" to "The MPLS path monitoring system may be at any server" Paragraph 2, Page 5: Change "monitor the path of it to LER j and then receive the packet back" to "monitors its path to LER j and then receives the packet back" Bullet 3, Page 7": Remove "to" from "The path LER j to PMS to must be available" Regards, Faisal Iqbal -----Original Message----- From: spring [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Martin Horneffer Sent: Monday, September 26, 2016 8:02 AM To: [email protected] Subject: Re: [spring] WGLC for draft-ietf-spring-oam-usecase Hello everyone, speaking as co-worker of one of the editors: From my own viewpoint I think this document makes a lot of sense and is in a good state. I'm not aware of any problemwith the current state of the document. And there already is an implementation report. The document should be sent to the IESG. The only reason not to do so might be to abandon SPRING usecase documents at all. But since we have bee asked to produce usecase documents and went along that track so far, we should IMHO proceed by promoting this document as well. Best regards, Martin Am 12.09.16 um 18:30 schrieb [email protected]: > Dear SPRING WG, > > The authors have indicated that draft-ietf-spring-oam-usecase is ready for > WGLC. > > Please send your comments to [email protected] on whether this use case is > ready to be sent to the IESG as an informational draft. We will plan to end > the WGLC on September 26. > > * Please comment as silence counts as a lack of interest. 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In the absence of WG support and review, this document will not be sent to the IESG. * You may also be interested in an implementation report: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-leipnitz-spring-pms-implementation-report-00 This document has 2 disclosed IPR: https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/search/?submit=draft&id=draft-ietf-spring-oam-usecase We are also polling for knowledge of implementations of part or all of what this document describe. Please inform the mailing list, the chairs, or only one of the chairs. Finally, if you want to volunteer to be Document Shepherd for this document, please let us know. Regards, --Bruno _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. 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