Hi Benoit,

I took the editor role from Stefano.

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On 13/12/17 12:50 , Benoit Claise wrote:
Benoit Claise has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-spring-resiliency-use-cases-11: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Some redundancy in the intro first two paragraphs.:

    This document reviews various use cases for the protection of
    services in a SPRING network.  The terminology used hereafter is in
    line with [RFC5286] and [RFC5714].

    This document reviews various use cases for the protection of
    services in a SPRING network.

removed the above duplicated sentence.

I will post the new revision once we close on all open items from you and other reviewers.

thanks,
Peter



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