Thanks a for the comments

Version 15 of the draft addresses your comments. See my comments below "#Ahmed"


On 6/9/18 12:01 AM, Przemyslaw Krol wrote:
Greetings,

Few minor, cosmetic/editorial suggestions:

2.5. Incoming Label Collision
[...]
*(Endpoint, Color)* representing an SR policy [I.D. filsfils-spring-segment-routing-policy]

(Color, Endpoint) is the ordering used by the policy draft. If the decision is to correct it, there is few references in the draft

#Ahmed: It does not matter from the point of view of label collision
2.5.1. Tie-breaking Rules
[...]
       o The Color ID is encoded using *16 bits*
*
*
should be 32 bits
(https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc5512#section-4.3.1 && https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-policy-00#section-2.1)
#Ahmed: Modified as suggested


2.6. Outgoing Label Collision
[...]
In the general case, the ingress node may not have exactly *have* the same data of the receiving node
#Ahmed
Corrected

2.7. PUSH, CONTINUE, and NEXT
PUSH, NEXT, and CONTINUE are operations applied by the forwarding plan*e*.
[...]

#Ahmed:
Corrected
2.8. MPLS Label downloaded to FIB corresponding to Global and Local SIDs
[...]
an IGP with SR extensions *[*I-D.ietf-isis-segment-routing-extensions, I-D.ietf-ospf-segment-routing-extensions]

^^^ missing '[' or alternatively both references should be enclosed in their own []
#Ahmed:
Corrected


thanks,
pk

On Fri, Jun 8, 2018 at 11:14 AM Chris Bowers <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:

    SPRING WG,

    I generally support publication of
    draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-mpls. However, I think
    that the text in sections 2.5 and 2.6 (on incoming label collisions)
    needs some work before publication. This text was added to
    the draft a few months ago, and has not gotten much review
    from the WG as a whole. The review and proposed text below
    focuses on these sections.

    As I understand the current text of the draft, the general
    approach to resolving incoming label collisions seems
    well-reasoned and complete.  However, it is possible that
    my interpretation of these tie-breaking rules is
    not what the authors intended.

    I'd like to propose the examples below to be included
    in the draft to help clarify the tie-breaking rules
    for incoming label collisions described in section 2.5.
    I have highlighted several cases in these examples,
    where I think the rules in section 2.5 need
    to be clarified in order to unambiguously determine
    the winning FEC in an example.

    It may also be the case that the authors or other
    WG participants will disagree with the interpretation of the
    rules used to choose a winning FEC in some of these
    examples.  In that case, we should discuss
    what is the correct interpretation, and clarify the
    text in the draft to make the correct interpretation
    clear.


    Incoming label collision examples
    =========

    Node A
    OSPF default admin distance for implementation=50
    ISIS default admin distance for implementation=60

    =========
    Example incoming label conflict for label=1005 on node A

    FEC1)
    OSPF prefix sid advertisement from node B for 198.51.100.5/32
    <http://198.51.100.5/32> with index=5
    OSPF SRGB on node A = [1000,1999]
    Incoming label=1005

    FEC2)
    ISIS prefix sid advertisement from node C for 203.0.113.105/32
    <http://203.0.113.105/32> with index=5
    ISIS SRGB on node A = [1000,1999]
    Incoming label=1005

    FEC1 and FEC2 both use dynamic SID assignment.  Since neither of
    the FEC types is SR Policy, we use the default admin distances of 50
    and 60 to break the tie.  So FEC1 wins.

    =========
    Example incoming label conflict for label=1006 on node A

    FEC1)
    OSPF prefix sid advertisement from node B for 198.51.100.6/32
    <http://198.51.100.6/32> with index=6
    OSPF SRGB on node A = [1000,1999]
    Incoming label=1006

    FEC2)
    ISIS adjacency sid advertisement from node A with label=1006
    Incoming label=1006
    Node A allocates this adjacency SID dynamically,
    and it may differ across router reboots.

    FEC1 and FEC2 both use dynamic SID assignment.  Since neither of
    the FEC types is SR Policy, we use the default admin distances of 50
    and 60 to break the tie.  So FEC1 wins.

    =========
    Example incoming label conflict for label=1007 on node A

    FEC1)
    OSPF prefix sid advertisement from node B for 198.51.100.7/32
    <http://198.51.100.7/32> with index=7
    OSPF SRGB on node A = [1000,1999]
    Incoming label=1007

    FEC2)
    ISIS adjacency sid advertisement from node A with label=1007
    Incoming label=1007
    Node A assigns this adjacency SID explicitly via configuration,
    so the adjacency SID survives router reboots.

    FEC1 uses dynamic SID assignment, while FEC2 uses explicit SID
    assignment. So FEC2 wins.

    =========
    Example incoming label conflict for label=1008 on node A

    FEC1)
    OSPF prefix sid advertisement from node B for 198.51.100..8/32
    <http://198.51.100.8/32> with index=8
    OSPF SRGB on node A = [1000,1999]
    Incoming label=1008

    FEC2)
    SR Policy advertisement from controller to node A
    Endpoint = 192.0.2.208, color = 100, SID-List = <S1, S2>
    Binding-SID label = 1008

    FEC1 and FEC2 both use dynamic SID assignment.
    Since one of the FEC types is SR Policy, default admin
    distance is not used to break the tie.
    /* The text in Section 2.5.1 needs to be clarified to specify
    whether SR Policy always loses or always wins in this case. */

    =========
    Example incoming label conflict for label=1009 on node A

    FEC1)
    OSPF adjacency sid advertisement by node A with label=1009
    Incoming label=1009
    Node A assigns this adjacency SID explicitly via configuration,
    so the adjacency SID survives router reboots.

    FEC2)
    ISIS adjacency sid advertisement by node A with label=1009
    Incoming label=1009
    Node A assigns this adjacency SID explicitly via configuration,
    so the adjacency SID survives router reboots.

    FEC1 and FEC2 both use explicit SID assignment.  This kind of
    incoming label collision should never occur, since an
    implement of explicit SID assignment MUST guarantee
    collision freeness on the same router.

    ========
    Example incoming label conflict for label=1010 on node A

    FEC1)
    ISIS prefix sid advertisement from node B for 203.0.113.110/32
    <http://203.0.113.110/32> with index=10
    ISIS SRGB on node A = [1000,1999]
    Incoming label=1010

    FEC2)
    ISIS adjacency sid advertisement by node A with label=1010
    Incoming label=1010
    Node A allocates this adjacency SID dynamically,
    and it may differ across router reboots.

    FEC1 and FEC2 both use dynamic SID assignment. Since both FECs
    are from the same MCC, they have the same default admin distance.
    So we compare FEC type code-point.  FEC1 has FEC type
    code-point=120, while FEC2 has FEC type code-point=130.
    Therefore, FEC1 wins.

    =========
    Example incoming label conflict for label=1011 on node A

    FEC1)
    ISIS prefix sid advertisement from node B for 203.0.113.111/32
    <http://203.0.113.111/32> with index=11
    ISIS SRGB on node A = [1000,1999]
    Incoming label=1011

    FEC2)
    ISIS prefix sid advertisement from node C for
    2001:DB8:1000::11/128 with index=11
    ISIS SRGB on node A = [1000,1999]
    Incoming label=1011

    FEC1 and FEC2 both use dynamic SID assignment. Since both FECs
    are from the same MCC, they have the same default admin distance.
    So we compare FEC type code-point.  Both FECs have FEC type
    code-point=120. So we compare address family.  Since IPv4 is
    preferred over IPv6, FEC1 wins.

    =========
    Example incoming label conflict for label=1012 on node A

    FEC1)
    ISIS prefix sid advertisement from node B for 203.0.113.112/32
    <http://203.0.113.112/32> with index=12
    ISIS SRGB on node A = [1000,1999]
    Incoming label=1012

    FEC2)
    ISIS prefix sid advertisement from node C for 203.0.113.128/30
    <http://203.0.113.128/30> with index=12
    ISIS SRGB on node A = [1000,1999]
    Incoming label=1012

    FEC1 and FEC2 both use dynamic SID assignment. Since both FECs
    are from the same MCC, they have the same default admin distance.
    So we compare FEC type code-point.  Both FECs have FEC type
    code-point=120. So we compare address family.  Both are IPv4 address
    family, so we compare prefix length.  FEC1 has prefix length=32,
    and FEC2 has prefix length=30, so FEC2 wins.

    =========
    Example incoming label conflict for label=1013 on node A

    FEC1)
    ISIS prefix sid advertisement from node B for 203.0.113.113/32
    <http://203.0.113.113/32> with index=13
    ISIS SRGB on node A = [1000,1999]
    Incoming label=1013

    FEC2)
    ISIS prefix sid advertisement from node C for 203.0.113..213/32
    <http://203.0.113.213/32> with index=13
    ISIS SRGB on node A = [1000,1999]
    Incoming label=1013

    FEC1 and FEC2 both use dynamic SID assignment. Since both FECs
    are from the same MCC, they have the same default admin distance.
    So we compare FEC type code-point.  Both FECs have FEC type
    code-point=120. So we compare address family.  Both are IPv4 address
    family, so we compare prefix length.  Prefix lengths are the same,
    so we compare prefix.  FEC1 has the lower prefix, so FEC1 wins..

    =========
    Example incoming label conflict for label=1014 on node A

    FEC1)
    ISIS prefix sid advertisement from node B for 203.0.113.114/32
    <http://203.0.113.114/32> with index=14
    Routing Instance ID = 1000
    ISIS SRGB on node A = [1000,1999]
    Incoming label=1014

    FEC2)
    ISIS prefix sid advertisement from node C for 203.0.113.114/32
    <http://203.0.113.114/32> with index=14
    Routing Instance ID = 2000
    ISIS SRGB on node A = [1000,1999]
    Incoming label=1014

    These two FECs match all the way through the prefix length and
    prefix.
    So Routing Instance ID breaks the tie, with FEC1 winning.

    =========
    Example incoming label conflict for label=1015 on node A

    FEC1)
    ISIS prefix sid advertisement from node B for 203.0.113.115/32
    <http://203.0.113.115/32> with index=15
    Routing Instance ID = 1000
    ISIS Multi-topology ID = 50
    ISIS SRGB on node A = [1000,1999]
    Incoming label=1015

    FEC2)
    ISIS prefix sid advertisement from node C for 203.0.113.115/32
    <http://203.0.113.115/32> with index=15
    Routing Instance ID = 1000
    ISIS Multi-topology ID = 40
    ISIS SRGB on node A = [1000,1999]
    Incoming label=1015

    These two FECs match all the way through the prefix length,
    prefix, and
    Routing Instance ID.  We compare ISIS Multi-topology ID, so FEC2 wins.

    /* There appears to be a typo in section 2.5.1, with two different
    orderings shown for a prefix-based FEC:
    Prefix, Routing Instance, Topology, Algorithm
    and
    (Prefix Length, Prefix, SR Algorithm, routing_instance_id, Topology)
    This needs to be corrected. */

    =========
    Example incoming label conflict for label=1016 on node A

    FEC1)
    ISIS prefix sid advertisement from node B for 203.0.113.116/32
    <http://203.0.113.116/32> with index=16
    Routing Instance ID = 1000
    ISIS Multi-topology ID = 50
    SR algorithm = 0
    ISIS SRGB on node A = [1000,1999]
    Incoming label=1016

    FEC2)
    ISIS prefix sid advertisement from node C for 203..0.113.116/32
    <http://203.0.113.116/32> with index=16
    Routing Instance ID = 1000
    ISIS Multi-topology ID = 50
    SR algorithm = 22
    ISIS SRGB on node A = [1000,1999]
    Incoming label=1016

    These two FECs match all the way through the prefix length,
    prefix, and
    Routing Instance ID, and Multi-topology ID. We compare SR
    algorithm ID, so
    FEC1 wins.

    =========
    Example incoming label conflict for label=1017 on node A

    FEC1)
    ISIS prefix sid advertisement from node B for 203.0.113.117/32
    <http://203.0.113.117/32> with index=17
    ISIS SRGB on node A = [1000,1999]
    Incoming label=1017

    FEC2)
    ISIS mapping server advertisement (SID/Label Binding TLV) from node D:
    Range=100, Prefix = 203.0.113.1/32 <http://203.0.113.1/32>
    This mapping server advertisment generates 100 mappings, one of which
    maps 203.0.113.17/32 <http://203.0.113.17/32> to index=17.
    ISIS SRGB on node A = [1000,1999]
    Incoming label=1017

    The fact that FEC1 comes from a normal prefix sid advertisement and
    FEC2 is generated from a mapping server advertisement is not
    used as a tie-breaking parameter. Both FECs use dynamic SID
    assignment,
    are from the same MCC, have the same FEC type code-point=120.
    Their prefix
    lengths are the same as well.  FEC2 wins based on lower numerical
    prefix value,
    since 203.0.113.17 is less than 203.0.113.117.

    =========
    Example incoming label conflict for label=1018 on node A

    FEC1)
    ISIS IPv4 adjacency sid advertisement from node A with label=1018
    corresponding to next-hop interface address=192.0.2.100, outgoing
    interface ID=5
    Incoming label=1018
    Node A allocates this adjacency SID dynamically,
    and it may differ across router reboots.

    FEC2)
    ISIS IPv6 adjacency sid advertisement from node A with label=1018
    corresponding to 2001:DB8:2000::100/128, outgoing interface ID=6.
    Incoming label=1018
    Node A allocates this adjacency SID dynamically,
    and it may differ across router reboots.

    Both FECs use dynamic SID assignment, are from the same MCC,
    and have the same FEC type code-point=130.  FEC1 wins
    because IPv4 address family is preferred over IPv6.

    =========
    Example incoming label conflict for label=1019 on node A

    FEC1)
    ISIS IPv4 adjacency sid advertisement from node A with label=1019
    corresponding to next-hop interface address=192.0.2.220, outgoing
    interface ID=7
    Incoming label=1019
    Node A allocates this adjacency SID dynamically,
    and it may differ across router reboots.

    FEC2)
    ISIS IPv4 adjacency sid advertisement from node A with label=1019
    corresponding to next-hop interface address=192.0.2.230, outgoing
    interface ID=8
    Incoming label=1019
    Node A allocates this adjacency SID dynamically,
    and it may differ across router reboots.

    Both FECs use dynamic SID assignment, are from the same MCC,
    and have the same FEC type code-point=130. Both FECs have to
    same address family.  FEC1 wins based on having the lowest next-hop
    interface address.

    /* It is not clear how to construct an example that
    would result in using the outgoing interface ID as a tie-breaker.
    It would be useful to understand why this is and clarify
    it in the text. */
    =========
    Example incoming label conflict for label=1020 on node A

    FEC1)
    SR Policy advertisement from controller to node A
    Endpoint address=2001:DB8:3000::100, color=100, SID-List=<S1, S2>
    Binding-SID label=1020

    FEC2)
    SR Policy advertisement from controller to node A
    Endpoint address=192.0.2.60, color=100, SID-List=<S3, S4>
    Binding-SID label=1020

    The FECs match through the tie-breaks up to and including
    having the same FEC type code-point=140.
    FEC2 wins based on IPv4 address family being preferred
    over IPv6.

    =========
    Example incoming label conflict for label=1021 on node A

    FEC1)
    SR Policy advertisement from controller to node A
    Endpoint address=192.0.2.70, color=100, SID-List=<S1, S2>
    Binding-SID label=1021

    FEC2)
    SR Policy advertisement from controller to node A
    Endpoint address=192.0.2.71, color=100, SID-List=<S3, S4>
    Binding-SID label=1021

    The FECs match through the tie-breaks up to and including
    having the same address family. FEC1 wins by having the
    lower numerical endpoint address value.

    =========

    I'd like to propose the examples below to be included
    in the draft to help clarify section 2.6
    (currently entitled "Outgoing Label Collision").


    Examples of the Effect Incoming Label Collision on Outgoing Label
    Programming
    ====================================

    Example of effect of incoming label collision for label=1022
    on outgoing label programming on node A

    FEC1)
    ISIS prefix sid advertisement from node B for 203.0.113.122/32
    <http://203.0.113.122/32> with index=22
    ISIS SRGB on node A = [1000,1999]
    Incoming label=1022

    FEC2)
    ISIS prefix sid advertisement from node C for 203.0.113.222/32
    <http://203.0.113.222/32> with index=22
    ISIS SRGB on node A = [1000,1999]
    Incoming label=1022

    FEC1 wins based on lowest numerical prefix value.  This means that
    node A
    installs a transit MPLS forwarding entry to SWAP incoming
    label=1022, with outgoing label N,
    and use outgoing interace I. N is determined by the index
    associated with FEC1 (index=22) and
    the SRGB advertised by the next-hop node on the shortest path to reach
    203.0.113.122/32 <http://203.0.113.122/32>.

    Node A will generally also install an ingress MPLS forwarding
    entry corresponding to FEC1 for
    incoming prefix=203.0.113.122/32 <http://203.0.113.122/32> pushing
    outgoing label N, and using outgoing interace I.

    The rule in section 2.6 means that node A MUST NOT install an
    ingress MPLS forwarding entry
    corresponding to FEC2 ( which would be for incoming
    prefix=203.0.113.222/32 <http://203.0.113.222/32>).
    ========

    Example of effect of incoming label collision for label=1023
    on outgoing label programming on node A

    FEC1)
    SR Policy advertisement from controller to node A
    Endpoint address=192.0.2.80, color=100, SID-List=<S1, S2>
    Binding-SID label=1023

    FEC2)
    SR Policy advertisement from controller to node A
    Endpoint address=192.0.2.81, color=100, SID-List=<S3, S4>
    Binding-SID label=1023

    FEC1 wins by having the lower numerical endpoint address value.
    This means that node A
    installs a transit MPLS forwarding entry to SWAP incoming
    label=1023, with outgoing labels
    and outgoing interface determined by the SID-List for FEC1.
    Node A will generally also install an ingress MPLS forwarding
    entry corresponding to FEC1 for
    incoming prefix=192.0.2.80/32 <http://192.0.2.80/32> pushing
    outgoing labels and using the outgoing interface
    determined by the SID-List for FEC1.

    The rule in section 2.6 means that node A MUST NOT install an
    ingress MPLS forwarding entry
    corresponding to FEC2 ( which would be for incoming
    prefix=192.0.2.81/32 <http://192.0.2.81/32>).

    ========

    General comment:

    section 2.6 title:
    existing:
    Outgoing Label Collision:
    proposed:
    Effect of Incoming Label Collision on Outgoing Label Programming :
    --------------------------------------


    Thanks,
    Chris


    On Thu, May 24, 2018 at 12:14 PM, <[email protected]
    <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:

        Hello Working Group,

        This email starts a Working Group Last Call on
        draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-mpls-13 [1] which is
        considered mature and ready for a final working group review.

        Please read this document if you haven't read the most recent
        version yet, and send your comments to the list, no later than
        *June 08*.

        As a reminder, this document had already passed a WGLC more
        than a year ago on version -06 [2], had been sent to the AD
        but then returned to the WG.

        Since then, the document has significantly changed, so please
        read it again. In particular, it now includes the resolution
        in case of incoming label collision. Hence it killed
        draft-ietf-spring-conflict-resolution.

        Both co-chairs co-author this document, hence:

        - Shraddha has agreed to be the document shepherd... Thank you
        Shraddha.

        - Martin, our AD, has agreed to evaluate the WG consensus.

        Thank you,

        Bruno, Rob

        [1]
        https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-mpls-13

        [2]
        https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/spring/STiYsQJWuVXA1C9hK4BiUnyMu7Y

        
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