Prem,

Ketan can call me in when you meet locally and I can help remotely.

Cheers,
Clarence

On 06/11/2018 04:23, Przemyslaw Krol wrote:
Greetings,

Would it be possible to close this (scope of this document) while in BKK? We could then take the draft editing work offline and come back with it before PRG. Hopefully this would let all involved parties be clear on the purpose of this document and make soliciting feedback easier.

thank you,




On Tue, Oct 30, 2018 at 11:44 PM Przemyslaw Krol <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:

    Howdy,

    I tend to agree that in the current shape,
    draft-filsfils-spring-sr-policy-considerations-02
    
<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-filsfils-spring-sr-policy-considerations-02> 
document
    attempts to cover architectural, operational and use-case aspects
    which may not be optimal. To that point, if we can agree whether it
    is supposed to be a more operationally-focused extension to its
    parent draft-ietf-spring-segment-routing-policy draft or more of a
    use case overview, we could make relevant adjustments/augmentations
    to accommodate that. I personally see a value in both options but
    based on Rob's feedback, the latter one may not be suited for SPRING WG.

    thanks,
    pk

    On Mon, Oct 22, 2018 at 9:50 PM Rob Shakir <[email protected]> wrote:

        Ketan, Authors,

        Thanks for the update. Further responses are in-line marked [rjs].

        My key feedback here is that I feel like we're not really on the
        same page as to what this draft is trying to communicate.
        Perhaps if we agreed this, then it'd be clearer what the right
        direction for the document is.

        I'd really encourage the WG to read this doc and provide the
        authors with feedback -- especially if you have an
        implementation, or are implementing SR-TE Policy in your network.

        On Thu, 18 Oct 2018 at 19:10 Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)
        <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote:


              * (2) What is the intention of the diagram shown in this
                section? It seems to be completely an implementation
                detail that an implementation has the "SRPM" that acts
                as a central resolution point. For instance, what should
                a reader learn from the fact that the SRPM is not a
                standard RIB resolution process? If there are
                suggestions that one wants this implementation - should
                there be some discussion of the complexity of this new
                API between say, the BGP daemon and a general RIB
                process?____

            */[KT] /**/We will clarify in the text that the section
            provides a conceptual overview of components/functionality
            that work with each other to implement SR Policy on a
            headend. The intention is not to define APIs between the
            blocks since those are implementation details. We have
            several drafts related to the SR Policy functionality –
            besides the architecture draft, there are extensions to BGP
            (BGP-SRTE & LS), PCEP then we have Yang model. This draft
            puts these blocks into reference so implementers get an idea
            of the functionality that maps to say BGP and the SR Policy
            processes (e.g. draft-ietf-idr-segment-routing-te-policy)./*

            ____

              * (2) My general feedback on this section is that this is
                implementation discussion, that does not add to the IETF
                content that we are publishing within SPRING. Like we
                have had discussion of use case drafts, I think this is
                similar but from the implementor side. I'd like to
                discuss the value that this content has.____

            */[KT] /**/There is a difference between documenting
            implementation details and providing a conceptual overview
            of the implementation aspects. Especially when defining an
            architecture which involves multiple protocols and
            functional blocks. I find it valuable as an implementer
            myself./*


        [rjs] I don't think that the edits that are made to this section
        particularly add anything. If the intention is the conceptual
        overview, I don't understand why we refer to say, the "SRP
        process". Conceptually, shouldn't this be describing interaction
        between functional blocks? i.e., we have a functional block in
        the architecture that is responsible for learning candidate
        paths (it's an implementation detail from where...), and selects
        the active path, installing it into the RIB or FIB.

        If the intention is to have this be conceptual, my suggestion
        would be to make the language refer to architectural concepts -
        rather than what seem to be realisations of the idea, and to
        convert the diagrams into lists that describe what each block is
        doing. Others may have thoughts on this too - especially where
        they have other implementations.

            ____

              * (3.1) I think that this section has some useful content,
                but it's buried by starting out by defining the
                algorithms.. Why not make this section be focused
                towards the constraints that must be considered when
                calculating a SID stack for a particular path. i.e., the
                key points seem to be:____

                  o Use of the IGP metric as the metric for path
                    optimisation is desirable, especially in constrained
                    push or readable depth environments, because it
                    allows the minimum number of deviations from the
                    shortest path and therefore labels.____
                  o If a different metric is used, then this implies
                    that every time that metric differs from the IGP
                    metric, then this will result in additional SIDs.____

                      + There is no mention of flex-algorithm in this
                        section. It seems relevant given that you can
                        also mitigate the problem that is trying to be
                        solved here by having a set of prefix SIDs per
                        metric.____

            */[KT] /**/We will put a forward reference to the Flex Algo
            section here./*____

                  o It may be advantageous to sacrifice optimality of
                    the path calculation solution by relaxing the
                    optimisation constraints.____

                      + The draft should talk about the operational
                        considerations here - i.e., it implies that you
                        can actually tolerate the margin in the
                        optimisation objective for the service.____
                      + The "just pick the best you can do within N
                        SIDs" is dangerous, since it means that the
                        network delivers a service that *isn't* what the
                        operator asked for - which may result in service
                        degradation (e.g., consider live/live where
                        there is a maximum latency difference that is
                        tolerable between the two feeds).____

            */[KT] /**/We will add text clarifying this aspect. However,
            the point is also that the operator may be OK with the “best
            possible” and so such an option may be useful in some
            deployments./*


        [rjs] I don't think that we agree at all on whether this section
        is useful in its current form. What is the message that we're
        trying to convey in this section of the document? If it is that
        there are possible algorithms that may be used by an operator
        dependent on their service, I'm not clear that we need to
        document this. The value to me *would be* that we cover some of
        the caveats of calculating policies that are specific to SR --
        i.e., SID stack depth being something that is influenced by
        divergence from the shortest path, and the fact that we might
        need to sacrifice the optimal solution to pathing based on these
        constraints, then I think it'd be useful. The current text does
        not get this across clearly.

            ____

              * (3.2) I'm unclear of the value of this text. It seems to
                me that we're restating some of the optimisation
                objectives that are known for general TE (and, for
                example, are described by - say RFC3209). What is it
                that we're trying to communicate to the reader here --
                can it be covered by "existing path calculation
                considerations, such as resource affinity [rfc3209] can
                be applied to the path calculation of SR paths"?____

            */[KT] /**/We do not assume that anyone that is deploying SR
            Policies is familiar with RSVP-TE. RFC3209 does cover
            resource affinity but not the others. Some of the
            constraints are unique to SR. Hence, there is a value in
            specifying the available constraints./*


        [rjs]: Again, we might have to agree to disagree here. I did not
        make an assertion that someone was familiar with RSVP-TE, but
        that they were familiar with *TE* -- there are networks that
        meet these constraints that do not use SR or RSVP-TE.... Again,
        I'd find it very useful to understand what the authors are
        trying to communicate in this section. If it's that there are
        particular trade-offs, sure, let's find new wording -- but if
        not, then I'm not clear why SPRING needs to standardise an
        incomplete list of optimisation criteria.

            ____

              * (3.4) I'm again going to question the value of this
                section -- it doesn't seem to give enough detail of the
                algorithm that you're proposing to be generally useful,
                and points out it is a node-local behaviour. If there's
                a desire to get to a common understanding of how to take
                a path and compress its SID stack, then let's write this
                out.____

            */[KT] /**/Agree that this is a node local behavior.
            However, the high level description does indicate how an
            implementation could go about determining a path to a SID in
            an efficient manner./*


        [rjs]: If there's really value in this high-level description
        (I'm not sure I agree...) -- it seems like then restructuring
        this section to write out the algorithm then use it to
        illustrate how it operates on a network after this.

            ____

              * (4) See my comments on Section 2 of this document, why
                is describing how the interaction between different
                processes within what sounds like a single
                implementation something that we should publish within
                the IETF?____

            */[KT] /**/These examples are important to illustrate how
            the candidate path selection tiebreaker rules work in
            different conditions. The interactions are also valuable to
            understand the selection which happens say within BGP (based
            on its best path) for BGP-SRTE and the selection that then
            happens at SR Policy level. This section was originally
            placed in the Appendix of the SR Policy Architecture draft
            since the candidate path selection tiebreaker rules were
            specified in that draft. Later was move to this
            informational draft./*


        [rjs]: In my view, this example would be best _as succinctly_ as
        possible to demonstrate the preferences in the actual draft. It
        seems to me that the explanations themselves are quite wordy to
        make a couple of clear points:

          - BGP path selection is unaffected by SR-TE policy.
          - If a protocol does not make its own path selection, then
        SR-TE policy attributes are considered to differentiate between
        them.
          etc.

        Ideally, this should be clear in the policy architecture draft
        itself. If it can't be made clear, then I think we should
        seriously consider whether we have the right level of complexity
        here.

            ____

              * (5+5.1+5.2) The core point that seems to be being made
                here is that - within a single IGP area the head-end has
                all the visibility it requires; if there are multiple
                areas, there are ways that a head-end could get access
                to the areas that it is not part of (e.g., BGP-LS). Is
                anything more being said here? Do the implementation
                details that there are BGP-LS RRs actually matter?____

            */[KT] /**/The intention is to provide guidance for some of
            the deployment options for achieving this functionality./*____

              * (5.3) Similarly to the above, this seems to assume one
                particular mechanism of building a centralised system,
                that doesn't need any new extensions in the IETF. Is
                this something that we need to document?____

            */[KT] /**/We explain while taking an example of a mechanism
            based on IETF standards that is available for operators
            looking to deploy this model./*____

              * (6.2) This section seems to imply that there can never
                be allocations from the SRLB that are not dynamically
                advertised via some other protocol. Is this really true?____

            */[KT] /**/I don’t believe this was the intention. We will
            clarify this in the text../*____

              * (8) Given that there is a separate draft discussing this
                -- what is the motivation to have this in this document?____

            */[KT] /**/This section gives and overview of the proposal
            with an example of optical circuit.. It also clarifies that
            the concept described is applicable not just for optical
            links but in general to other types of layer 2 circuits and
            tunnels as well. The draft-anand-spring-poi-sr goes into the
            details of the use-case, protocol mechanism and extensions
            specifically for optical networks only./*


        [rjs]: For the above points -- I think we've clearly seen in the
        WG and IESG that there is not a huge amount of appetite to
        publish use case drafts. From an operational perspective, I also
        don't really find these sections that useful since they don't
        really give me enough information to be able to figure out an
        implementation. I'd be interested whether the working group
        thinks that they are sufficiently of interest to include in this
        document.

        Cheers,
        r.

            *//*____

            Thanks,____

            r.____

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